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Xert · Jan 2, 2009

I have been working on this for a while now I need opions two questions only do you like it and is it to long

Xert said:

The Dark Emperium and the Light Republic seperated only by the ocean have waged wars for almost 1,000 years. On the side of the Dark Emperium are the Fire Tribes, the Water Kingdom, and the Forsest Monks. On the side of the Light Republic the Earth Dictatorship, the Free People of Ice, and the Thunder Tradeing Company.

And of cource the Folowers of the Wind a religous cult that belives in the great wind a spirt that uses the wind to speak to it's folowers.

Rules:
No god modding
No power playing
If you want to be a ruler of a contry act as one (that means staying in one place mainly) Postions as a country leader are only avalable until
No over powered moves.
No Yaio or yuri
PG-13 in everything except language which will be censorced useing normal meathods
write phil d in your first post
No killing other charaters without proper permission
Please keep posting
And of cource have fun folks

More info:

Dark Emperium: It is a large contry to the north the Water Kingdom. To the south the Karac Desert and the Fire tribes. And it shares it's large amount of forests to the Forest Monks. The Emperium is advanced in miltary science, it also has a massive organized miltary and is well liked by it's nieghbors. Besides the dence forest it also has an expancive coast line and three plains. The Capital is The Darkest Castle. A large castle that is very large surrounded by an even larger city. The contry has been around for centries. And under the Dark Emperium's land there is something else the Catacombs. A network of tunnals used for traval.

Water Kingdom: A contry mainly concisting of small islands. They are advanced in shipcraft. Known mainly becasue of their supeior building skills. Their buildings are taller than normal buildings. All the cities are on the coast and use canals to move from place to place. Their capital city is Unda, a beutiful city know for it's flowers and fountains. It is beutiful and humble at the same time. The castle lies at the back of the city from it you could see the city and the entire island from the highest towers. They have also had once been at war with the Fire Tribes

Fire Tribes: Wandering tribes that move through the Karac Desert. Not know for much except their warlike ways. The tribes are constantly fighting each other. They are ruled by a High Cheiften who seetles these conflicts to keep in power. Almost all tribes move around but the Tribe that the High Cheiften directly rules over has a village called Incendia. The only real excptional thing about it is it's large stone wall that surounds the village.

Forest Monks: A religios group that worships life and belives in moderation. Consiting manly of Elves. The teachings have been the same for years. And due to beliefs their Guardians (warriors who defend the church) are only aloud to use Long Swords to fight with. When the war started the Main Cathedral, The Nemus Cathedral, was in the Dark Emperium. Because of this the Light Rebuplic orderd a death sentance on Elves and anyone who was part of the Forest church. The Nemus Cathedral is a large church with tall spires. The bells that are rung there can be heard all across the forest. The church has beutiful tapistries that dipict the history of Elve's and the church.

Light Republic: A good sized contry surrounded by water. The west is very moutious and the east and middle of the contry is fairly level. To the naked eye the contry is orderly,beutiful and magnificent. But corruption and injustice are a daily thing. Senators use their positions to live in wealth. The Grand Councilman passes taxes to fund the "troops" but uses the money for himself, the Senators and only a small bit goes to the troops. Their milatary is mainly defencive because of cut backs and to make themselfs look like the victims of this war. Their capital city is Luminarium in the center of the city is the Capital Building where all of the senators deside what to do with the contry.

Earth Dictatorship: The entire contry is underground. The dictatorship has only been around for about ten years. The dictstorship started after the long period of Anarchy the Earth had. Now under this rule the people are strong and rich again. The Earth Dictatorship consits of drawfs mainly. They are know for there wepon craft, gems and gold. There capital city is Terra. A large city with a giant yellow gem that acts as a sun to the underground city. Large gold statues display the contry's wealth. The castle is carved into one of the stone walls.

Free People of the Ice: The contry lies on the moutain tops above the Earth Dictatorship. There are no laws in this contry to alow for scientic progress. The scientis experiment with no limitations. The contry has no goverment or anyone in power. The Earth dictatorship provides protection in exchage for technology. The contry consits of Gnomes and recently Vampires.

Thunder Tradeing Company: Also know as the TTC. The company was founded after the develpoment of the Thunder Transport system. The system uses thunder magic to move an object from one place to anouther. It still doesn't work with living test subjects. It was origonaly just a suplyer of arms for both sides of the war. But they desided to sell "lost" Fire Tribe rokets (fire works) to the Light Republic. After that the Allies of the Fire Tribes stoped working with the TTC. The Company is on a small flat land mass in the center of the ocean. Their headquarters is a large tower in the center of the island. It's headed by a Board of Directors.

Creatures in this world:
Dragons (to have one you must be in the miltary and of higher Rank)
Unicorns
Mintors
Faeries (this can be a race) (hate Pixes)
Pixes (also can be a race)
Deonos (also a race)
Werewolfs (also a race)
tell me if I should add

World Leaders: If you chose to be a world leader you deside what your contry is going to do and what happens to other charaters that are in your contry. But your charater will be rather restricted. They won't be going any where very easly. Plus you will have to make desishons that effect the entire RP.

OC sheet:

Username:
Name:
Age:
Race:
Contry of birth:
Contry alliend with or wind folower:
Magic/powers:
Apperance:
Bio:
Other:

Charaters:

Username: Xert
Name: Emperor Sithos Darkra
Age: 48
Race: Human
Contry of birth: Dark Emperium
Contry alliend with or wind folower: Dark Emeperium
Magic/powers: Darkness
Apperance: White hair with black eyes. Black tunic and robes. And Black armor for battle
Bio: Came into power at the age of fourteen. He is loved and feared by his people. The way the perfect ruler should be.
Other: none
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