I made these for my friend, also forum brother, on GaiaOnline for a Naruto Ninja School RP. I only like the vert one. The others phail.
the first one was good, but i was not sure about the eyes(i am a naruto nerd and a starwars nerd, mostle starwars). the second one was good, good highlights with the eyes, the only thing i think you should change is try to make the kunin knife darker, and fill the white hole in it with a different color The third one i liked, i think you should but some more color in there. good job man!!!
First one: Is okay =/, but add some depth, and the colors... =/, add some gradient maps. Second one: Better :33, but it kinda lacks in depth, and retire the duplicates of the head (Or blur them >.>). Third one: Turn it to B&W, the colors matching phail, and retire the head duplicates.