Naruto: Itachi Returns (OMG RUN)

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  1. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    YAYZ my third story! *hugs self*
    yes, i realize i have two other unfinished storys up and onther non-posted (yet) story, but i couldnt resist
    but i assure you the next one (my crack story) is KH (and by crack, i mean total and utter randomness)
    don't worry, i'll get to all my stories eventually
    lets see now...
    as with all my storys, is rated PG-13 for swearing an VIOLENCE! (i mean, come on, its NARUTO! of course theres going to be violence...)
    and about the title-
    OMG ITACHIS BACK!!! RUN AWAY!!! *runs about in circles like a crazy person*
    ahem...
    anyways, on to the story *squee*
    that is if your still reading this stupid opening paragraph
    lolz

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    Proulogue-in which there is running (and alot of it)
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    Running

    Sasuke was running.

    He didn't know what he was running from, but he didn't care to find out.

    He saw the village up ahead. Just a little further...

    But fate was against him. He hadn't been paying sttention to the ground and tripped on a rock. He landed face-first in the grass.

    "Oww..." he complained, rubbing his chin. He heard a crack behind him, reminding him of the fact he was being chased. He cringed as he saw the shadow loom over him.

    Sasuke looked behind him to see a shadow, the shadow he feared from his nightmares and childhood, the one he wanted to see dead.

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    Yay a cliffy =D
    lolz
    cnc?

    Random Footnotes:
    -sasuke is my favorite character ^-^
    -...i have no idea why lolz
    -this story could have gone in so many directions it gives me a headache *takes an asprin*
    -some of you may be thinking 'HES A NINJA WHY DOESNT HE JUST ATTACK?!?' there are so many reasons:
    ~lack of kunais (or any other ninja tools)
    ~hes scared to death
    ~erm... actually, thats is lolz
    -cookies to the first person to guess who the shadow is lolz
    -erm... toast. lolz.
     
  2. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    It seems nobody is going to reply to the extra-short proulogue, so im just gonna go ahead and post the next chappie lolz

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    Chapter 1- in which kakashi is very occ *moves away from kakashi*
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    Kaori, Kakash, and Hinata were returning to the village after a long mission. They were very close to the village now, so their guard was slightly down.

    "I can't wait toget home and take a nice, long nap." moaned Kakashi. "My feet are killing me..."

    Kaori and Hinata nodded,too tired to talk.They continued on in silenceuntil they reached the clearingat the edge of the village, where Kaori suddenly stopped. His sensitive nose had picked up somethinghuman lying in the grass.

    Kakashi and Hinata stopped when they realized Kaori was no longer with them. "What's the matter?" Hinata asked tentativley.

    "I smell blood... " Kaori murmered. "Over there..." he pointed.

    Kakashi and Hinata looked in the direction he was pointing, but it was hard for them to seewith the rising sun in their eyes.

    Kaori didn't wait for them to respond, but shot off in the direction the overwhelming stench was coming from.

    He stopped cold when he saw what the dark shape was.

    Sasuke Uchiha was lying on the grass, his arm bleeding heavily, his shirt torn in long scratches down his back, where more blood was seeping through.

    "Oh Gawd..." Kakashi whispered as he and Hinata ran up to join Kaori.

    They knelt down next to Sasuke to assess the damage done to the poor boy. Kakashi flipped him onto his back and heard a sharp intake of breath as the dirt stung Sasuke's wounds.

    Hinata shook Sasuke's shoulder in a vain attempt to wake him up. "Sasuke? Sasuke, wake up please." This time Kaori tried, shaking Sasuke a little more roughly than he had intended, earning a small groan from him.

    "Quit it, you guys. Sasuke needs to rest." Kakashi hissed at them.

    But unfourtunaly, the shaking and voices had pulled Sasuke out of his unconcious state. He tried to sit up, but merely fell back again, grimacing in pain.

    "What... happened?" Sasuke asked slowly. Kakashi was alarmed at the faintness of his voice.

    "Please, don't move Sasuke. Your hurt." Hinata pleaded.

    "Oh..." he said softly before falling back into unconciousness.

    Kakashi sighed. 'Poor kid...' he thought. He picked up Sasuke up, being careful of his wounds. He started towards the village as Hinata picked up Sasuke's fallen headband.

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    arn't I evil? *evil laughter* lolz
    cnc plz?

    Random Footnotes:
    -Kaori is an original character belonging to my friend, who has given me permision to use him in the story. Hes part wolf and can trasform whenever he wants to. =D
    -Kakashi and Hinata will be VERY occ (especialy later on)
    -Sasuke will also be slightly occ
    -i know this is a naruto fic, but idk if hes even gonna be in it XD
    -cookies are still up for grabs if you can guess who the shadow is =D
    -i like CEREAL!!! XD
     
  3. Aura Goddess

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    This is really good I like it:)
     
  4. Hopefulwishes Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm sorta guessing that the shadow is either Orichmaru or Itachi. Hey, can you write some more? 'Cause I like this story....WRITE MORE OR I'LL SEND DARTH VADER ON YOU!!!! :starwars: Muhahahahahahahha! >D
     
  5. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    I'm getting hooked on this. Can't wait for the next chapter!
     
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    write more nao!!!!!
     
  7. Fearless A good and beautiful child

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    o.O
    *runs for life*

    arigato ^^

    o.O
    yes ma'am ^_^!

    STUPID WRITERS BLOCK!!! *bangs head into wall*
    I'm really sorry its been so long, guys, I'm working on teh next chappy as we speak!