Namine Anna Mea Meehaa Chapter 3

Chapter 3

“Do you want us to show you around?” Pence asked… Natalie was relieved that someone finally offered…
“I’d really like that,” she said quietly… The trio stood up, then Natalie did…They all showed her around the marketplace…Where to buy potions, and armor…They soon showed her the sandlot…She saw a tough-looking kid, a Mexican kid, a small kid, and a silent girl…
“What do you want?” the tough-looking kid asked… Hayner made a face at him… The tough-looking kid started laughing…Then looked at Natalie…
“Who’s this?” he asked… Natalie was scared to talk to him…but she did…
“I-I’m N-Natalie…” she spoke hesitating…
“Natalie, eh?” he asked…
“Yeah…she’s new here,” Pence said abruptly. The tough-looking kid then announced his name…
“I’m Seifer…If you want to stay on top, let me give you a word of advice…Don’t hang out with these jerks.”
“Jerks?” Hayner asked while yelling…
“Yeah, you got a problem with that shrimpy?” The Mexican kid asked…
“Hey back off!” Ollette screamed at him…
“What are you gonna do bout it?” he asked Ollette…He then pushed her and she fell over…
“Raijin, that’s enough!” Seifer yelled… Natalie ran over to help Ollette up…
“Listen Seifer, we didn’t come here to start something…We came to show Natalie around…” Hayner said…Seifer looked at Natalie… Fuujin walked over to Natalie and stuck out her hand…
“I’m Fuujin, but call me Fuu,” she said in a serious tone…Natalie shook her hand… Then the smallest kid came over…He didn’t seem like the rest...He seemed nice...He spoke in a child’s voice…
“Hi, I’m Vivi!” he said…Natalie couldn’t help it, but she backed up away…
“What’s wrong?” he asked… Natalie didn’t want to be rude, but he looked like a Heartless… Natalie was soon beginning to feel overwhelmed again…Like the darkness was coming back… She started to choke…She coughed and couldn’t breathe. She closed her eyes for a brief moment, then she opened her eyes, and she was soon in the realm of Darkness… She still couldn’t breathe…It felt as if a force was killing her slowly and painfully… She was dropping…then crashed into the ground… She was in completely in pain on her right arm… The darkness clouded her with memories…

“You are the one,” a voice said…
“The Age-less Hybrid,” another said…
“50 years” another said…
Then a woman spoke out, in a complete sentence…
“Namine Anna Mae Meehaa, you will suffer a terrible fate…”

Natalie opened her eyes, but the brightness of the sun soon surrounded her… She looked up to see 2 figures standing in front of her…but when she looked around, she wasn’t at the sandlot anymore…but on a beach. She saw a 15 year old boy with brown spiky hair and dark blue eyes. He was wearing a battle outfit… The other boy was 16 and had really long silver hair that went down his back… He had hazel eyes and a yellow, black and white outfit that looked in style. They were also very wet…
“Are you okay?” the brown spiky haired boy asked… Natalie nodded…She sat up and her hood fell off her head revealing white and black hair…
“Where’s Hayner? Pence? Ollette?” she asked…
“Who?” The silver haired boy asked…
“My friends,” she said… She looked around the beach and saw many tree houses and shafts… The silver haired boy held out his hand to help her up… She took his hand and stood up…
“I’m Sora, welcome to destiny Islands” The brown haired boy welcomed… Natalie nodded… She noticed the silver haired boy was still holding her hand…
“I’m Natalie,” she said…She turned over to the silver haired boy who was staring at her…
“I’m Riku,” he finally presented… Natalie started to giggle…
“What is so funny?” he asked clueless… Natalie looked down at the hand Riku was holding… She pulled it up in front of him…
“Can I have my hand back?” she asked… Riku let go then started to blush… Natalie thought he was adorable and cute…
“Your friends…do they live here?” Riku asked… Natalie stared into his eyes…
“I don’t know…I appeared in Twilight Town, then here…” she said…
Natalie couldn’t help but ask Riku this question… She looked at his clothing…
“Why are you wet?” she asked smiling… Riku looked down at her and replied,
“Well, I saw you drifting in the sea on a piece of driftwood…I swam out to get you…When I pulled you in, Sora found me, then you woke up,” Riku explained…
“But how did I get here?” Natalie asked… Riku shook his head…
“I’m not too sure how you got here…but I’m glad you did…” he said… Out of nowhere, a man in an organization cloak appeared…He had honey eyes, and uneven silver hair…
“Xemnas!” Sora shouted… Riku put out his hand and made Way to Dawn appear, just as Sora did with Oathkeeper…
“I’m here for Natalie,” he announced… Riku looked at her who was standing next to him…
“You’re in the organization?” Riku asked…
“The what?” she replied with another question… Xemnas started approaching but Sora jumped forward…making him back off a little bit.
“She isn’t at the moment, but she will be soon,” Xemnas answered…Natalie walked forward a bit…
“How do you know me?” she asked… Xemnas chuckled a small bit…
“Do you not remember me, Namine Anna Mae Meehaa?” Xemnas asked smiling evilly.
“My name is not Namine! It’s Natalie!” she shouted… Xemnas got out his laser blades…
“You’re coming with me whether you like it or not Namine,” he said…
“STOP CALLING ME THAT!” she yelled… Soon, a Sais appeared in each hand… She ran towards Xemnas and tried to slice him, but he jumped up into the air…
“Namine, you’re beginning to remember aren’t you?” he asked… Riku and Sora soon ran next to Natalie…
“What is he talking about Natalie?” Sora asked… Even Natalie didn’t know…Xemnas flew down and tried to strike…Riku pushed Natalie and Sora then jumped up starting to fight Xemnas…They both came down… Xemnas struck Riku in his side, kicked him up in air, jumped up and struck him harder...He hit the ground and passed out… Sora then ran up and tried to fight Xemnas… Xemnas wasn’t at the least bit tired…but after 10 minutes of Sora fighting…He started getting weaker…Natalie was over at Riku, worried…but she still watched the fight…Xemnas went out of a limb and struck Sora in his side also. Sora was too weak to do anything… Xemnas did the same thing to Sora as he did to Riku… He kicked him into the air after landing a blow in his side, jumped up, and struck him REALLY hard, which caused Sora to land a few feet beside Riku…Sora tried to get up, but he then passed out alongside Riku… Xemnas then walked over to Natalie…
She looked up and saw him coming towards her…She got out her Sais blade…
“Get away from me!” she yelled… Xemnas grabbed her Sais blade, and took it from her… HE then threw it over in the sand, and then grabbed her wrist…
“Come on Namine,” he said…
“Let go!” she yelled… Xemnas ignored her… She pulled on her arm for him to let go… Xemnas then opened a Corridor of Darkness…
“What is that thing!” she yelled… Riku slowly opened his eyes and saw Natalie being forced into a corridor… He got up quickly then ran over to Natalie…
“Natalie!” he yelled…Xemnas then looked over and saw Riku running… Xemnas shoved Natalie into the ground. She twisted her ankle and landed on it…She laid there in pain… Riku ran over as fast as he could…It seemed forever to reach him, but once he did, he used Way to Dawn to hit him, and then he shoved Xemnas into the corridor with great force… It then disappeared…

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If nobody will reply to my story, then this will be my last chapter...I'm turning this into my Language arts teacher and I need to know how I am doing, or else I'll just write something else on paper...

 

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