Namine Anna Mae Meehaa…Pronunciation: (Meeyaa) Namine was sitting in a white room, all to herself. The silence soon sustained her peaceful mode…She was sitting in a white chair, and began drawing a woman…She had a black long sleeve shirt-hoody with a hood, black jeans, and two colored hair…Her hair was 2 feet long…one foot going up, was black…From the roots down, it was white… She drew the person she was named after…Her name, was Namine Anna Mae Meehaa… Namine Anna Mae Meehaa was Kairi’s grandmother, who supposedly had gone missing when she was 17. Namine knew nothing about her…She was a hero…She was known as the Masked Age-less Hybrid… She would wear a split-in-two diamond stone necklace around her neck, which would allow her to transform… Her eyes would go from aqua to pink, her clothing would change from black to white, and even her voice changed…The only thing that didn’t was her hair color… It stayed black and white, so to keep her identity a secret, she would hide it, under her hood… Namine sometimes wondered why she was named after a hero…Was it because she was special, because she was a nobody? Even she doesn’t have all the answers… Namine Anna Mae Meehaa has be lost for nearly 50 years…She entered a sleep mode…and would reawaken, once it was time the world needed her again… She kept her youth…but her memory sustained… Roxas walked in on Namine, who continued to draw… Roxas walked over and saw the picture… “Who is that?†Roxas asked…Namine closed her eyes… and drew one last detail without looking…A scar on each eye…Namine could feel where each line went…She paced herself drawing them… “Her name is Namine Anna Mae Meehaa…I was supposedly named after her and I want to find out why,†Namine spoke very softly as Roxas stood beside her… Roxas looked very closely at the picture… “What are you staring at?†Namine asked Roxas… Roxas pointed to an object that the woman was holding… “What is that?†Roxas asked calmly… Namine examined the object… “That is the Mask of Serenity… It concealed her secret identity…†Namine spoke softly… Roxas examined the mask…It was purple, and looked as if small waves were about to jump off at the ends…It had 4 loose strings attached…2 on each side… The formation of lines made it possible to make out that it was the ocean… Roxas then remembered why he’d come inside the room… He had news for her… “Namine, there is a new girl that was born a Nobody…Her name is Natalie (Nat-al-lay),†Roxas explained… Namine stopped drawing and pushed her pencil with great force into the pieces of paper…She started breathing heavily…Her eyes stared at the page and she soon pressed too hard and broke the pencil in half… Roxas put his hand on top of her hand… “Are you okay?†Roxas asked concerned about her… Namine looked at Roxas and hesitated… “Natalie, sounds a lot like my name…†Namine said while breathing a lot harder and a lot faster… She acted as if she were about to have a panic attack, but she took a deep breath, and formed a corridor of Darkness in front her seat… “Tell Diz, I’ll be back soon,†she said turning to Roxas… Roxas stared at her and nodded… She smiled and stood up…She soon then walked out of the room and into the corridor… Namine walked out of the Corridor of Darkness and appeared in Twilight Town at the train station…She looked over at the doors to the train station and saw a 14 year old girl starting to walk down the stairs… She had Pink eyes, a white long sleeved long dress similar to an organization cloak, but it was a dress…and her hair up in a ponytail in a hood…She had visible white hair… Namine then walked over to meet her… “Hi…are you Natalie?†Namine asked shyly… The woman soon jumped in shock… “H-how do you know my name?†she asked hesitating… “You are a nobody, and it’s my job to know all nobodies…†she said putting her hand up to where he heart would be… Natalie was in terrible shock…What was a nobody? Did she think that Namine meant she was worthless? “What else do you know about me? Why are you stalking me?†Natalie yelled. She pushed Namine and ran away…Namine fell to the ground… She watched as Natalie ran down the hill and into the Marketplace… Namine pulled herself up and frowned… “Natalie is scared...†Namine thought to herself… Namine then ran down the hill to the Marketplace…but she couldn’t see Natalie anywhere…Namine then closed her eyes and thought to herself… “Why does Diz want me to meet this girl?†She looked around the marketplace once more, and then headed off into a corridor of Darkness…Namine stepped through and disappeared…Natalie was watching from the small ally that lead to Hayner and the gangs hideout… She turned around and looked at the ally… She soon took a deep breath then started walking down…She looked over at a torn up rag covering a hole. She pushed it to the side and saw 3 young children… Ollette was the first to notice her… “Hey!†she said in a sweet way while waving… Pence looked over and saw her… “Hi, Nice to meet ya,†he said while smiling…The person that really caught her eye was Hayner…He was sitting on a box up high, and his blonde hair was just a mess that was in style… “You’re new around here, right?†he asked… Natalie shyly nodded… “I’m Hayner,†he then points at Ollette and said “This is Ollette,†and then points at Pence… “And this is Pence.†He finally said… She waved at them and smiled… “What’s your name?†Ollette asked as she stood up and walked over to her… “I-I’m N-Natalie,†she said more shyly…She wanted to be happy, but she couldn’t really feel it, so instead she expressed it in a smile…Why couldn’t she feel the happiness and only express it… “Natalie…†Ollette said sweetly…, “What a nice name.†Natalie nodded her head and smiled…but soon, she felt surrounded…Like something had a hold of her…Natalie fell to the ground, but all she could see was darkness… She no longer had visible sight of the new friends she made… She felt as she couldn’t breath and had so much pressure on her…She tried to stick her hand out…She got it up, but the darkness soon shrouded it…She let out a tear…knowing she was being engulfed in darkness… The darkness soon shrouded her whole body…You could barely see her… but something grabbed her hand…It looked like a boy… She could see him…It looked like Hayner…She soon opened her eyes from where she was lying…She was on the cold ground…She looked up and saw a blurry vision…She was surrounded by 3 people…Her vision became clear again and Hayner was sitting beside her on his knees… Pence was standing up over her and Ollette was sitting next to her on the opposite side of Hayner… “You okay?†Hayner asked as he watched her open her eyes… The light blinded her so she sat up to get out of the sunlight… Hayner and Ollette helped her up over to the couch… “What was that?†Natalie asked… Pence and Hayner gave a confused look…Ollette asked her, “What was what?†Natalie looked over at Ollette… “That black stuff…It was all over me…†she answered… Ollette gave a confused look too… “Just...*sighs* never mind…†she said… “So where are you from?†Pence asked out of the blue… Natalie soon answered the question… “I don’t really know…I just found myself wandering around here, and I was met by a blonde girl with a short white dress…She called me a nobody,†she answered… “A nobody? What’s that?†Hayner asked… “I’m, not too sure,†Natalie said… “Do you want us to show you around?†Pence asked… Natalie was relieved that someone finally offered… “I’d really like that,†she said quietly… The trio stood up, then Natalie did…They all showed her around the marketplace…Where to buy potions, and armor…They soon showed her the sandlot…She saw a tough-looking kid, a Mexican kid, a small kid, and a silent girl… “What do you want?†the tough-looking kid asked… Hayner made a face at him… The tough-looking kid started laughing…Then looked at Natalie… “Who’s this?†he asked… Natalie was scared to talk to him…but she did… “I-I’m N-Natalie…†she spoke hesitating… “Natalie, eh?†he asked… “Yeah…she’s new here,†Pence said abruptly. The tough-looking kid then announced his name… “I’m Seifer…If you want to stay on top, let me give you a word of advice…Don’t hang out with these jerks.†“Jerks?†Hayner asked while yelling… “Yeah, you got a problem with that shrimpy?†The Mexican kid asked… “Hey back off!†Ollette screamed at him… “What are you gonna do bout it?†he asked Ollette…He then pushed her and she fell over… “Raijin, that’s enough!†Seifer yelled… Natalie ran over to help Ollette up… “Listen Seifer, we didn’t come here to start something…We came to show Natalie around…†Hayner said…Seifer looked at Natalie… Fuujin walked over to Natalie and stuck out her hand… “I’m Fuujin, but call me Fuu,†she said in a serious tone…Natalie shook her hand… Then the smallest kid came over…He didn’t seem like the rest...He seemed nice...He spoke in a child’s voice… “Hi, I’m Vivi!†he said…Natalie couldn’t help it, but she backed up away… “What’s wrong?†he asked… Natalie didn’t want to be rude, but he looked like a Heartless… Natalie was soon beginning to feel overwhelmed again…Like the darkness was coming back… She started to choke…She coughed and couldn’t breathe. She closed her eyes for a brief moment, then she opened her eyes, and she was soon in the realm of Darkness… She still couldn’t breathe…It felt as if a force was killing her slowly and painfully… She was dropping…then crashed into the ground… She was in completely in pain on her right arm… The darkness clouded her with memories… “You are the one,†a voice said… “The Age-less Hybrid,†another said… “50 years†another said… Then a man spoke out, in a complete sentence… “Namine Anna Mae Meehaa, you will suffer a terrible fate…†Natalie opened her eyes, but the brightness of the sun soon surrounded her… She looked up to see 2 figures standing in front of her…but when she looked around, she wasn’t at the sandlot anymore…but on a beach. She saw a 15 year old boy with brown spiky hair and dark blue eyes. He was wearing a battle outfit… The other boy was 16 and had really long silver hair that went down his back… He had hazel eyes and a yellow, black and white outfit that looked in style. They were also very wet… “Are you okay?†the brown spiky haired boy asked… Natalie nodded…She sat up and her hood fell off her head revealing white and black hair… “Where’s Hayner? Pence? Ollette?†she asked… “Who?†The silver haired boy asked… “My friends,†she said… She looked around the beach and saw many tree houses and shafts… The silver haired boy held out his hand to help her up… She took his hand and stood up… “I’m Sora, welcome to destiny Islands†The brown haired boy welcomed… Natalie nodded… She noticed the silver haired boy was still holding her hand… “I’m Natalie,†she said…She turned over to the silver haired boy who was staring at her… “I’m Riku,†he finally presented… Namine started to giggle… “What is so funny?†he asked clueless… Namine looked down at the hand Riku was holding… She pulled it up in front of him… “Can I have my hand back?†she asked… Riku let go then started to blush… Natalie thought he was adorable and cute… “Your friends…do they live here?†Riku asked… Natalie stared into his eyes… “I don’t know…I appeared in Twilight Town, then here…†she said… Natalie couldn’t help but ask Riku this question… She looked at his clothing… “Why are you wet?†she asked smiling… Riku looked down at her and replied, “Well, I saw you drifting in the sea on a piece of driftwood…I swam out to get you…When I pulled you in, Sora found me, then you woke up,†Riku explained… “But how did I get here?†Natalie asked… Riku shook his head… “I’m not too sure how you got here…but I’m glad you did…†he said… Out of nowhere, a man in an organization cloak appeared…He had honey eyes, and uneven silver hair… “Xemnas!†Sora shouted… Riku put out his hand and made Way to Dawn appear, just as Sora did with Oathkeeper… “I’m here for Natalie,†he announced… Riku looked at her who was standing next to him… “You’re in the organization?†Riku asked… “The what?†she replied with another question… Xemnas started approaching but Sora jumped forward…making him back off a little bit. “She isn’t at the moment, but she will be soon,†Xemnas answered…Natalie walked forward a bit… “How do you know me?†she asked… Xemnas chuckled a small bit… “Do you not remember me, Namine Anna Mae Meehaa?†Xemnas asked smiling evilly. “My name is not Namine! It’s Natalie!†she shouted… Xemnas got out his laser blades… “You’re coming with me whether you like it or not Namine,†he said… “STOP CALLING ME THAT!†she yelled… Soon, a Sais appeared in each hand… She ran towards Xemnas and tried to slice him, but he jumped up into the air… “Namine, you’re beginning to remember aren’t you?†he asked… Riku and Sora soon ran next to Natalie… “What is he talking about Natalie?†Sora asked… Even Natalie didn’t know…Xemnas flew down and tried to strike…Riku pushed Natalie and Sora then jumped up starting to fight Xemnas…They both came down… Xemnas struck Riku in his side, kicked him up in air, jumped up and struck him harder...He hit the ground and passed out… Sora then ran up and tried to fight Xemnas… Xemnas wasn’t at the least bit tired…but after 10 minutes of Sora fighting…He started getting weaker…Natalie was over at Riku, worried…but she still watched the fight…Xemnas went out of a limb and struck Sora in his side also. Sora was too weak to do anything… Xemnas did the same thing to Sora as he did to Riku… He kicked him into the air after landing a blow in his side, jumped up, and struck him REALLY hard, which caused Sora to land a few feet beside Riku…Sora tried to get up, but he then passed out alongside Riku… Xemnas then walked over to Natalie… She looked up and saw him coming towards her…She got out her Sais blade… “Get away from me!†she yelled… Xemnas grabbed her Sais blade, and took it from her… HE then threw it over in the sand, and then grabbed her wrist… “Come on Namine,†he said… “Let go!†she yelled… Xemnas ignored her… She pulled on her arm for him to let go… Xemnas then opened a Corridor of Darkness… “What is that thing!†she yelled… Riku slowly opened his eyes and saw Natalie being forced into a corridor… He got up quickly then ran over to Natalie… “Natalie!†he yelled…Xemnas then looked over and saw Riku running… Xemnas shoved Natalie into the ground. She twisted her ankle and landed on it…She laid there in pain… Riku ran over as fast as he could…It seemed forever to reach him, but once he did, he used Way to Dawn to hit him, and then he shoved Xemnas into the corridor with great force… It then disappeared… Riku then turned his attention to Natalie… She as lying on the ground with her arms wrapped around her right leg… “Natalie, you okay?†Riku asked…He removed her arms from her leg so he could look at it…Her ankle was swollen, but not broken… “I’m fine...Go check on Sora,†Natalie suggested…Riku looked at her one last time then ran over to get Sora… Natalie saw that Riku shook him a couple of times then he woke up… Sora then stood up and walked over with Riku to go help Natalie… Riku stood in front of her and Sora stood to the right of him… “Do you think you can walk?†Riku asked… Natalie tried to stand up, but instead…she fell and landed into Riku’s arms…She was blushing… “Here…I’ll help,†he said… He picked her up by grabbing her skinny waist and pulled up both her legs… She wrapped her arms around his neck as he began to carry her along the beach… But Natalie started to choke again… She couldn’t breathe again…Why does this keep happening to her…Why does the Darkness control her like this? She started breathing heavily and put her head against Riku’s chest… “Natalie?†Riku asked… She closed her eyes… “Natalie, what’s wrong?†he asked her…but soon, all she could see was darkness… This time, it wasn’t stopping…She was falling again…Her whole body covered in darkness…She couldn’t see any light…She tried to scream, but the darkness made it impossible for her to even let out a breath…She heard her name being called…but she couldn’t find which way it was… She soon felt something cold splashing on her face… She started coughing and the taste was foul...Salty… She opened her eyes, and Riku and Sora were in front of her…She was lying on the beach again right at the waves of the ocean… She sat up and started spitting out the foul tasting salt water…Riku handed her bottled water that was in a pouch tied to his belt… “Thank you,†she said sweetly… She took the bottle and got a drink of some fresh water… “You okay?†Sora asked… She put the lid back on the water bottle and handed it back to Riku… She shook her head no… “What’s wrong then?†Riku asked… Natalie dropped a tear and then another…She soon began crying… “The darkness…†she started…Riku looked at her… She was just staring at the ground… “The Darkness won’t let go,†she said again… She looked at Riku.. Her eyes were all puffy and red...Riku then hugged her…She hugged him back, she began crying on his shoulder… “Natalie, don’t worry…I know what it feels like to be engulfed by the darkness…†he said… He picked her back up and started heading for a tree house… Sora pushed the leaves aside and allowed Riku and Natalie to pass… Inside was a bed on some sand…The large leaves were covering the ceiling… There were no windows…Riku put her on the bed… “You can stay here tonight…†he offered… She smiled at him…She forgotten how late it must’ve been…The sun had already set and the moon was starting to shine. Riku was nervous, but he kissed her on the cheek, “Hope you have a wonderful time here,†He said… He began to walk out of the room… “Wait!†Natalie said… Riku turned around… Natalie stood up and limped over to him...She fell back into his arms… “I don’t just want a kiss on the cheek,†she said… She gazed into his hazel eyes as he gazed into her pink ones… She got closer, and closer… She was ready…but was he? Riku leaned in…he’d never kissed a girl, but he was sure about this girl… Natalie kissed him on the lips… Riku kissed back…They kissed romantically for about 30 seconds…Then Riku smiled… Riku helped her back on the bed, and then he left… Natalie was very happy, but felt bad she couldn’t feel it… “Why can’t I feel these emotions?†she asked herself… She soon laid down on the bed and soon fell asleep… *Dream* Everything was pitch black…Darkness was still here… “Not again!†Natalie yelled… She looked around and noticed the darkness hadn’t touched her yet…Light was surrounding her… “The Stone! Use the Diamond Stone…†a voice said… “Push them together…†another said… “Namine Anna Mae Meehaa…The Age-less Hybrid…†a man said… “Never use your transformation…Once you have, you will suffer,†someone said… *End Dream* Natalie SHOT up from her bed… She screamed…She looked around…It was morning… She got up and tried to walk, forgetting she hurt it last night… She fell over and hit the sand… “Oww!†she yelled… She tried to get up again and to start walking… but she fell over again… “Ahh!†she yelled…She grabbed the nearest thing to get herself up…She used the wall to get herself out of the tree house (It was not up in the trees, it was made of trees)…She tried to walk outside… She spotted Riku who was in the ocean surfing the waves… She limped over to a rock and sat on it… Riku was in his swimming trunks…He was really cute…His board was yellow, black, and white like his outfit… His strap that was connected from his surfboard to his ankle was all 3 in a pattern… “Hi Riku!†Natalie yelled to him… Riku took his attention off the wave and looked at Natalie who was awake…He smiled...He continued riding the wave… The Wave started closing in on him...He was pretty far out… He tried to make it out, but the wave crashed down on him… Natalie giggled a little bit…She looked around for a few seconds…Riku didn’t come back up… Natalie got worried… A piece of his surfboard came up… “RIKU!†Natalie yelled… She jumped off the rock, but fell…She stumbled but she got up looking at the ocean… She then remembered her dream… Her necklace… She looked down at it… “I’ll suffer a terrible fate, but I want to help him,†she said.. She started to cry, and then pushed the two pieces together…Her eyes glowed and a sudden rush of wind shot at her…Her hair flowed in the wind along with her clothes…They changed colors…They changed from Pink to Aqua, her white dress turned into a black long-sleeved shirt and black jeans…and her voice changed…She transformed into Namine Anna Mae Meehaa… Her ankle stopped hurting and she ran into the ocean after Riku… She dove down close to where he was… She saw his motionless body down next to a bush…The strap had broken off his surfboard and got caught in it…She kicked both her feet and broke off the strap. She then grabbed Riku’s body and brought it to the surface… She started coughing out salt water…and started swimming for shore… She dragged Riku’s body back on land… She then got down on her knees and started giving him CPR…She held his nose, and his chin and started breathing in his mouth… He wouldn’t wake up… “C’mon Riku!†she yelled… She pushed on his chest… He soon began coughing out water… “Oh my goodness, Riku!†she yelled… Riku opened his eyes…He saw someone he’d never seen before… “W-Who are you?†he asked… Then a bright light shined in his eyes, causing him to close them for a minute…She transformed back into Natalie during the time he had his eyes closed…Riku opened his eyes and saw Natalie...HE smiled Riku stood up…The pain came back in Natalie’s leg…She fell back into Riku’s arms… “Is your leg still hurting?†he asked…This time it wasn’t…She’d been warned…Now she will have to suffer… “No…I-I can’t breath!†she yelled… She started choking more… She was coughing…Riku held her in his arms… “Natalie!†he yelled… “Riku...I’m...not Natalie…I’m…Namine…Anna Mae…Meehaa,†she said… She was coughing and choking…She knew the darkness was going to get her this time…She could feel it… “Natalie!†he yelled… “Riku?†she asked weakly… Riku dropped a tear… “What?†he asked…Natalie gave a dazed look at him… “Don’t forget me,†she said… She died right in his arms…The Darkness stole her heart…Riku began crying… “Natalie! Wake up!†he yelled…He held her closely to him…She was a brave woman…but her somebody’s heart was too strong…it was gone…lost in darkness… Naalie could feel herself floating in darkness…Those last words she spoke, she heard for all eternity… “Don’t forget me,†Namine was walking throughout the mansion, heading for the computer room. She walked in and stumbled upon Diz sitting at his station. “Diz…that new nobody…Why did you want me to meet her? She was afraid of me,†Namine said… Diz looked at young Namine… He knew it was time for the truth… “Young Namine,†he said in his deep voice… “Natalie is Namine Anna Mae Meehaa in disguise…†he said… Namine looked at Diz frozen. She was in shock… “She is? Where is she?†she begged… Diz hated this part… “She recently passed, this morning…Everyone will soon forget her…and we will continue on with our lives…†Diz said… “She…She passed?†Namine asked in confusion… Diz then slowly nodded his head… “But…she...I mean…†Namine stuttered… Diz needed to tell her… “Would you like to know the truth about young Natalie?†he asked… Namine looked up at Diz and slowly nodded… Diz then pointed to the seat next to him... Namine sat down and listened to what he had to say. “Namine Anna Mae Meehaa, was born as an Age-less Hybrid. Her heart was too strong, so her birth parent’s left her in darkness. Then she became a nobody… She is the nobody Age-less Hybrid…The somebody Age-less Hybrid had her heart, shattered. Her somebody’s heart was too strong for any nobody to have to leave behind…So she slowly passed into darkness. I messaged her not to use her transformation…but she wanted to save Riku, and by saving Riku, she saved the whole world…†Diz explained… He then turned to his computer Namine was sad…Her one chance to meet her, and she was gone. Namine then asked Diz, “How could she save the world, if she saved Riku?†she asked. Diz then turned around slowly and looked at Namine… “If he was to die, his nobody and heartless would’ve destroyed all worlds…†Diz explained again… Namine looked down… “Don’t forget me,†she said… She let out a tear… “I beg your pardon?†Diz asked… Namine looked up, showing her tears. “Don’t forget me,†she repeated… Diz then understood what she meant… “Her last words, she will hear forever…†he explained… Namine then asked one final question… “How do we forget about her?†she asked… Diz then took a deep breath… “She was never really born in light… She was born in the darkness…She was never supposed to be active… Hayner’s gang already forgot her, but I’m not sure if Riku will…Everyone that she remembers will instantly forget her… Making her feel lonely, but Riku’s heart won’t allow him to forget her…So she’s floating in darkness, hoping someone will find her,†Diz explained… Namine then walked out of the room and back into hers…She took out the drawing, and looked at her one last time… “Natalie, you will be forgotten by memories, but not by heart,†Namine said… She then stuck up the picture on the wall… THE END!!!! CnC please!!!
It should be "...has been lost for..." Should be: "...was in complete pain..." You just said it was Natalie. You contradicted yourself there. Altogehter, I was confused how the Twilight gang got caught up and how they tied in. And Naminé wasn't really in the story that much either. All in all, though...I give you a 3.5/5
Wow, that was pretty good. But the writing could be alittle better. But some spaces into those paragraphs so that we can read it better. It seemed you started to do that towards the end. And there were WAY too many of these: ....
I'm bad at these XD omg...lol XD I was thinking of Namine for a moment there.. Well..I knew my story wasn't really good, but I at least try to make an effort :D
Red: It's okay. Pink: It happened to me once, so don't worry about it. Gray: And it was a great effort.
No problem. I hope more people enter the story contest I hope they know that I am the person and they actually READ it.
lol..Well, next week, I hope to finish my Vexen's Experiment chapters...so I won't have to enter another boring story, xD
