Namine Anna Mae Meehaa...The last chapter

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    Riku leaned in…he’d never kissed a girl, but he was sure about this girl… Natalie kissed him on the lips… Riku kissed back…They kissed romantically for about 30 seconds…Then Riku smiled… Riku helped her back on the bed, and then he left… Natalie was very happy, but felt bad she couldn’t feel it…
    “Why can’t I feel these emotions?†she asked herself… She soon laid down on the bed and soon fell asleep…

    *Dream*

    Everything was pitch black…Darkness was still here…
    “Not again!†Natalie yelled… She looked around and noticed the darkness hadn’t touched her yet…Light was surrounding her…

    “The Stone!…Use the Diamond Stone…†a voice said…
    “Push them together…†another said…
    “Namine Anna Mae Meehaa…The Age-less Hybrid…†a man said…
    “Never use your transformation…Once you have, you will suffer,†someone said…


    *End Dream*

    Natalie SHOT up from her bed… She screamed…She looked around…It was morning… She got up and tried to walk, forgetting she hurt it last night… She fell over and hit the sand…
    “Oww!†she yelled… She tried to get up again and to start walking… but she fell over again…
    “Ahh!†she yelled…She grabbed the nearest thing to get herself up…She used the wall to get herself out of the tree house (It was not up in the trees, it was made of trees)…She tried to walk outside… She spotted Riku who was in the ocean surfing the waves… She limped over to a rock and sat on it… Riku was in his swimming trunks…He was really cute…His board was yellow, black, and white like his outfit… His strap that was connected from his surfboard to his ankle was all 3 in a pattern…
    “Hi Riku!†Natalie yelled to him… Riku took his attention off the wave and looked at Natalie who was awake…He smiled...He continued riding the wave… The Wave started closing in on him...He was pretty far out… He tried to make it out, but the wave crashed down on him… Natalie giggled a little bit…She looked around for about 10 seconds…Riku didn’t come back up… Natalie got worried… A piece of his surfboard came up…
    “RIKU!†Natalie yelled… She jumped off the rock, but fell…She stumbled but she got up looking at the ocean… She then remembered her dream… Her necklace… She looked down at it…
    “I’ll suffer a terrible fate, but I want to help him,†she said.. She started to cry, and then pushed the two pieces together…Her eyes glowed…They changed colors…They changed from Pink to Aqua, her white dress turned into a black long-sleeved shirt and black jeans…and her voice changed…She transformed into Namine Anna Mae Meehaa…
    Her ankle stopped hurting and she ran into the ocean after Riku… She dove down close to where he was… She saw his motionless body down next to a bush…The strap had broken off his surfboard and got caught in it…She kicked both her feet and broke off the strap. She then grabbed Riku’s body and brought it to the surface…
    She started coughing out salt water…and started swimming for shore… She dragged Riku’s body back on land… She then got down on her knees and started giving him CPR…She held his nose, and his chin and started breathing in his mouth… He wouldn’t wake up…
    “C’mon Riku!†she yelled… She pushed on his chest… He soon began coughing out water…
    “Oh my goodness, Riku!†she yelled… Riku opened his eyes…He saw someone he’d never seen before…
    “W-Who are you?†he asked… Then a bright light shined in his eyes…She transformed back into Natalie…
    Riku stood up…The pain came back in Natalie’s leg…She fell back into Riku’s arms…
    “Is your leg still hurting?†he asked…This time it wasn’t…She’d been warned…Now she will have to suffer…
    “No…I-I can’t breath!†she yelled… She started choking more… She was coughing…Riku held her in his arms…
    “Natalie!†he yelled…
    “Riku...I’m...not Natalie…I’m…Namine…Anna Mae…Meehaa,†she said… She was coughing and choking…She knew the darkness was going to get her this time…She could feel it…
    “Natalie!†he yelled…
    “Riku?†she asked weakly… Riku dropped a tear…
    “What?†he asked…Natalie g a dazed look at him…
    “Don’t forget me,†she said… She died right in his arms…The Darkness stole her heart…Riku began crying…
    “Natalie! Wake up!†he yelled…He held her closely to him…She was a brave woman…but her somebody’s heart was too strong…it was gone…lost in darkness… Natalie could feel herself floating in darkness…Those last words she spoke, she heard for all eternity…


    “Don’t forget me,â€




    The end!!!


    Please reply and tell me how I did! I'm posting this in the story of the week and I need to know how I did! This was my first fanfic that I completed!
     
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