Okay so I drew this in my last lesson since I couldn't sit around doing nothing since I had done all my work that the day, my friend helped a little with both arms the arm going up he helped by putting his arm up so I could just see how it should look and then again with the other arm since I drew it to thin, this took me about 50 min to drew and as soon as I had done I went to the library to scan it. Oh about the drawing this is a new nobody I came up with called Myrex (a cook for who ever can guess her real name) but I didn't want to draw her in the normal robes the other nobodies wear. By the way I really need to work on drawing hands I mean come on I can do this I know I can CnC
It needs some more definining lines, I cant tell if I'm staring at the top of her hand, or the palm for one, other than that its a pretty nice drawing, work on more shadowing, and definition, and you'll be fantastic.
It looks ok. A little more shadowing and darkening in the lines would make it better. Try to put more wrinkles in the clothing so it would have more details and you mite wana shade the neck a bit or draw several more lines to outline the hair with more detail.
You're definately getting better. ^_^ Not too bad with the hand, it's better than what I can to. ;) One thing I can say is that I think the top torso is a little disproportional.
it's really good. They only thing I see wrong, it that the neck is a bit wide, and the breast and a little..er..low. But besides that, it looks really good. :D Awesome job! Oh and the hands look find to me. =/