My version of Kingdom Hearts three

here is my version of KHIII:

" Donald?! Goofy?! Riku?! Kairi?!Where are you guys?"

Stumbling through the darkness, Sora searched for his friends. Suddenly, a door appeared in front of him.S quickly ran through the door and stepped inside.

 

umm...cool

 

"Here again?"
For the third time in his life, sora was at the Hall of Awakening.

"Soraaaa!"

Sora snapped his head in the direction of the sound.

"Goofy!"

"Somebody help us!"

"Hang on Donald!I'm coming"

Sora ran towards the only flight of stairs. Out of nowhere,Heartless appeared!

"Get out of my way!" Sora said menacingly.

Slowly one Heartless hobbled forward. The others quickly withdrew.

"You first? Fine, as long as I Get my friends."

"Sora! Help us! Please!"

" I'm coming Kairi. Just hang on!" Sora cried.

The Keyblade appeared in his hand. Sora charged in.

 

GO SORA GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




























































Kiaris so LUCKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I would like to point out that if you seriously do not make the chapters longer and not longer then like 10 lines in that fashion, Im not going to consider this a fanfic and move it to the spam zone.
Just a warning ^o^

And Dinesty, give more of a comment then that -_____-