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  1. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    This is my sword
    It wounds the wrong
    It speaks my words
    It sings a beautiful song

    It has a special design
    I use it to fight
    Its metal is that of a uneven line
    Me and my sword only follow the light    ​
     
    JedininjaZC, Dec 7, 2007
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    Damn that is nice poem
     
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  3. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    man it is so not fair u can rhyme but i can't
     
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  4. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *smiles* thanks budd! i am have a bunch of them laying around, so i will probably bring in some more!

    Lol, i love writting poems
     
    JedininjaZC, Dec 7, 2007
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  5. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    I LOVE YOU!!!!!
     
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  6. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!
     
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  7. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    Hmm..........:roll:
     
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  8. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    :glomp: lol you always make me laugh!
     
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  9. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    *thinking*:woohoo:
     
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    so come on start making out i am waiting
     
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  11. Princess Snow White I feel such an isomniac.

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    *leaves thread*
     
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  12. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    lol you sure abotu that?
     
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  13. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    uh no i am just bored
     
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  14. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Ooh, nice...although you accidentally misspelled "beautiful" and there shouldn't be an apostrophe on "its," but otherwise, great job...I love the rhyme scheme, and it's very inspirational...awesome! XD
     
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  15. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    TYVM!!!!!!!!
     
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  16. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    I'm pretty sure you could use this in a metaphorical way to represent something else. It's really good whether you take it literally or metaphorically, though. Great job.
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  17. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    thanks orange that means alot!
     
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  18. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    pretty good betchya u cant free verse as well as me i rule free verse
     
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  19. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    free verse? u mean with no rymthing?
     
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  20. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    yea *nodds head*
     
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