these are poems i wrote while i was in class and ignoring the *****y teacher Bloody Tears While my eyes cry and they bleed I cant stop crying even if i get what i need I no longer see the way I cannot face another day My eyes show my sorrow too bad i wont be seen tomorrow this is the one on my signature this is mine and only mine DO NOT STEAL!!!! Spiralling Insanity How far must one go? To see this shining show a beacon of hope forever out of reach these fools believe this to be insanity why must all of this be constantly on me? I wrote these these are original so yea tell me what you think and ill post more soon
Very nicely written. I like it. And it's fine to have suicidal or deathly undertones, gives the poem it's 'feeling'. Do post more~
My second set these i dont think are as good but these really have a dark comedy to them life clock Tick-tock goes the life clock the door protecting it wont open no mater how much you knock tick-tock its counting down tick-tock now you hit the ground Aggression Bloody face second place who has this you see its me why? its because i told them i wanna die
I'd like to hear more from you. I like suicidal/death poems. These are very nicely written. Of course genious kicks in when you're not listening to the teacher ;D Awesome work.
thank you. thank you. i wrote most of these while ignoring the spanish teacher because she cant speak spanish or english. ill try to post more soon but i kinda lost the paper i had them written on but ill find it and ill try to remember some more of them
