Traditional Art My sketch of Roxas and Namine! <3

i know i know
theres something wrong with namine
but i really cant put my finger on it
i think shes just too thin =]
well let me here your comments..
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http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=102&pictureid=977
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Okay, a few pointers:

1. Both of their eyes are a little big
2. Namine isn't that skinny (You were right)
3. Namine's hair should be straighter
4. Their heads are a bit disfigured

Other than those tiny things, I think its a great start.

 

Hmm, yeah, Naminé is very thin. Then, their hair are ok, but their eyes are a little too big.
The clothes are nice, but I think that Roxas' right cheek is too rounded.

 

again a sketch i drew when i was 13
i have noticed all those things when i first saw it ..
but i think Roxas looks cute ^^​

 

Good job! I agree with the people before me but it's a good job when you were 13! XD

 

thnx Xephos! ;]
the first time i saw it i realized all the things you guys said! ^^​

 

No prob! ^^