Traditional Art My Second Rinoa Sketch!!!

Ok the first one was this:



Now, after several hours of blood, tears and hard work I have made this:



OK i added some text onit to not the thing she is holding is meant to be like the Odine Bangle she tries to use in Disk1 (though I was usure of what is looked like so I made it look like a large circlet). The first problems i had doing was the wings because they were meant to look unreal/magical and not natural and I could not accomplish two ofthe same and after about six drafts those two were the final makes and i prefer the on rinoas right to the one on her left. the hands were hell for me and I gave her tiny little bangles on each arm, her blaster edge looks like a tatoo or something. the lips were not done by me but my friend Laura. I gave her a dirty emo fringe for the fun of it and indeed tweaked her outfit a lot turning the cardigan into a tight top like the one Quistis wears, I attemped shading but it's not exactly noticeable.

I had a lot of trouble gettin the photo taken and that is my poor excsma ridden right hand you cna see at the top.

CnC Please and be as brutal as you like (apart from saying every single thing is horrible or I'll cry).

 

If you really want to be a great artist, tutorials are your friends. In that link there's a list of tuts you can use to get proportions and body shape, because right now you have neither.

 

first of all

give her some boobs D:

shame for the women >:


secondly, I'd go with what Hissora said about the tutorials, the arms look like the start out too small, and the drawing looks flat.

The wings also need bit of work

Here is a tutorial on how to draw wings.

angel wings

Here is a few different ways to make wings, they don't all have to be the same :3


<3 Love ya Chrissy, sorry if I sound harsh D:

 

there's no harshness Sarah i'm just a bit mroe upset no one is pointing outany goodin the picture, CnC is meant to point out the bad and good and i've only got bad reviews (I would alos like to know what I'm doing right as well as whats wrong).