My Poem: The Worlds Beyond the Sea

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    I've wrote poems before, but if you noticed I mostly write stories, so I'm not sure if this is good. My creative mind is buzzing out of control now...Anyways, enjoy!

    The Worlds Beyond the Sea
    By: SilentNocturne

    I'm stuck on this place,
    This place of nothing.
    I look across the ocean,
    while my heart desires freedom.
    I'm bonded behind thse doors,
    my heart seeking freedom.

    I'm always curious about what lies beyond the sea,
    is it something I don't know of?
    I feel something is holding me back
    from seeing the world beyond the sea.
    I'm curious like a foal,
    galloping to the edge,
    and whinnying to the outside world.

    I dream about it everyday,
    of lands where anythign is possible.
    I stare at the night sky
    and watch the stars twinkle,
    and I wonder: What is that little light?

    I wish you could take me into that dimension,
    and show me what it is like.
    You're the only one I know who could,
    my silent wind.
    While my heart seeks freedom, it also loves you.

    I wish you could show me,
    that interstellar vortex,
    and weave our love through our fingers.

    I dream of the Worlds Beyond the Sea,
    that laughs at me with deep blue waters.
    I wish you could take me,
    through the secret dimension.


    Did anyone like it? It's my first poem that I posted in public :), so tell me if it sounded nice or bad. But, I think it's a very nice poem.