My Poem: I Dance in the Rain

I dance in the rain
Whether it's a drizzle or a downpour
It doesn't matter to me
I dance

The feeling of the raindrops
Trickling down my face
And across my body
It sends me shivers of pleasure

The pitter-patter of it falling
The rhythm of it against the pavement
Dropping, ever so steadily
It's like the beating of my heart

Its chilling sensation of coldness
Its capricious movement of droplets
It's all so pleasing
And all so wonderful to me

Then in a moment, the rain stops
An echoing silence follows
And I disappear, like snow before a sun's rays
But I will return because...

I dance in the rain
Whether it's a drizzle or a downpour
It doesn't matter to me
I dance ​

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Just a poem I wrote in the past, about the rain...it's not so good, but I hope you like it. :sweatdrop:​

 

WOOT WOOT awesome Nymph lol bit weird that i mention rain and you say you just posted a poem about it though

 

Thanks! lol And it is, but an interesting coincidence. XD

 

Is okay I suppose, but it could improve a bit.

 

Hmm...how?

 

That was an awesome poem! Keep up the good work!

 

NYMPHHHYYYY!

Another happy poem from you. I'm beginning to like reading your poems. They make me feel warm and fuzzehhh.

This one is great. Now, next time it rains, I'm going to dance in the rain just for you =D
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Aww thanks! And yay, dancing in the rain! :D :glomp:

 

XD

I'll do it and then write a poem about what it was like. XD

Now all it has to do is stop snowing and start raining.

I love your poems, Nymph. Keep writin' em.
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I will. :) Just have to find the inspiration...oh and when you write the poem, let me know so I can comment on it!!

 

Good length......good free verse....I like the atmosphere......I like the rain as well.....very good poem.....

 

I love it! I thought it had great rhythm... it was a pretty good length... big vocabulary i must add... lol... all in all it was a good poem! XD XD keep it up! :D

oh... and I think it really makes your poem stand out well when you repeat the first stanza at the end... nice touch... XD XD

 

Thanks I'm so glad you liked it! :D

 

I will.

And you lucky duck you just got 100 rep.

Yar, I read it again, and it makes me want it to rain.
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