My newest poems

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  1. AmericanSephiroth Traverse Town Homebody

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    i havent posted poems in probably close to a year so i figured im going to post the ones i made either early this year or late last year here goes.

    Monochrome maid and Icy master

    With you skin of crystal white
    And your eyes with sadness glow
    With your hair as black as obsidian night
    And your face does sadness show
    I the Icy Master with winter in my eyes
    And my hair the icy gray of broken dreams
    And a soul with which love merely dies
    Together we'll be forever it seems
    Our hearts stained bitter
    And our minds a cloud
    We shall cause wither
    In all around in a shroud
    I must say however i love
    My monochrome little dove

    That was my first love poem and my first sonnet it describes what i see as my ideal self and my ideal woman

    Heartless?

    I have no heart in this world
    In this life only sadness may show
    How long have i been alone?
    In this quiet world i call home
    I have friends they help the sadness
    What must i say is this gladness?
    This is the pleasure of being alone
    In this world I call home
    I had a love once a pretty little thing
    She shattered my heart and broke my brain
    What becomes I now I say
    This is on they and only they
    Still I am loved
    Young and alone but now I say
    Maybe I am not so alone

    this was my first non-sad poem and to prove it was different i tried not to rhyme as much

    Breaking The Heart Of The Night

    Heart of the night
    Filled with a heartless blight
    This heart is broken
    With words spoken and unspoken
    It will fill with blood and hate
    So is the loving heart's fate
    Will your love cure me?
    Or will your love fear it's fate to be?

    Love is sweet
    Sweet... like the beat
    Of a heart hidden
    With love ridden
    It ticks with a blood clot
    Like a bullet shot
    Your love will thrash
    The heart that hate makes trash

    Lost be I...
    Since i saw you cry
    Why oh why?
    did you die?
    This will cost my soul
    But once more you will be whole
    I give my life to he
    To make your life be
    A soul I will pay
    Even if its only a day
    Because you cured this broken heart
    Now in death we shall never part

    This is a progressive poem... a cookie if you can tell me the point of it all and also this is the longest poem i ever wrote (submitted it to a poetry contest and took i think 4th place state wide)


    So like, Dislike and comment on them if you want.