My Love ~ Random poem

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  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I loved you
    You loved me
    but you took advantage of my love
    You used me, just for kicks
    You thought my love wasn’t real
    You put my heart in two

    I can’t love again.
    My wounds are unfixable
    Thanks to you,
    Your love, was nothing more then the day you said my name
    Thanks to you.


    This just happenly popped into mind. Had to put on paper! tell me what you think please ^^
     
  2. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Hoorah more poets yay!


    I really liked this xD It is simple but effective and expresses itself clearly. I can definitely relate to the feeling within it ^^

    :noworries:

    :)
     
  3. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Thank you. I like this one myself. It just hits the right spot, with emotion.
     
  4. micketymike Twilight Town Denizen

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    its pretty good simple yet full of poetic complexities
     
  5. Shuhbooty moon child

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    Thank j00. Happy you think that way! ^^
     
  6. Luka Deafening silence

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    wow i like this ... poem muhaha
     
  7. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I think I may make a poem about you! You username makes me think a werid things! O.o

    And thank you!