this is a story i did a while back and it was so bad, I decided to remake it. The organle was ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1: The Breakdown After the headache making light had disappeared, Cloud looked around and stared in wonder. He was in some sort castle or big politician building. Is this some sort of trap or punishment Hades has set up for me? the blond wondered, and started his journey in the unknown building. In a matter of minutes, he came across a door that looked strangely familiar. He opened the door and Cloud gasped.He saw rows bookcases lined up like as a maze. this is where he did his studies as a young school boy. This can't be... Hollow Bastion, can it? He thought for sure that his home world was gone forever because of the heartless. He quickly made his way though the maze and can to a abrupt stop. A girl with long brown, braided hair and a light pink dress, was seating in a table, not to far away. May be she could help me thought cloud as he made his way over to the girl. "Ummm....," Cloud shyly started "can you help me out, I'm a little lost. The girl stood up and turned around. "Sure, there has been-" she suddenly stopped and ran to Cloud. She came fast and hard, nearly making Cloud fall. Then the blond felt his chest get wet. She was crying and hugging him! "Cloud! I missed you so much!" The blond blinked. Who was this girl!! The girl looked up. "Don't you remember me? It's me, Aerith. No way, Cloud thought how could this women be his childhood girlfriend. He put his around her and pulled her closer and whispered "I so glad your okay" After a long hug, they finally broke out. They both stared and smiled at each other, until Aerith glanced at his sword "Isn't that, Zack's sword? Why are you wearing it?" Cloud turned around and stared to walk out. As he walked he answered "He died because of me." and stormed out of the room. Before door closed, he could hear Aerith cry. As he exited the castle, he saw the world slowly rebuilding itself. better hurry and get this over with before more people arrive As he was near the town when he heard footsteps. Cloud drew out his sword and pointed to where the steps where. "Eeeeppppp" Aerith jumped out the swords way just in time before yelling "Can't you look before you kill!" The blond went wide eyed and put the sword away. "Sorry, I thought you were HIM." "Who?" asked Aerith sacredly. He sighed he would have to tell her. "During these past nine years, the darkness in my heart slowly increased. But in stead of turning into a heartless, a man named Sephiroth was born. The only way to find the light again, is to beat him." A long pause filled the unconformable setting. "Then let me help you!" cried the girl "You can't go through this by your self! I don't want to lose you again!" Cloud walked to her, put his hand on her shoulder and whispered "I swore to protect the people I love, that includes you." Then Aerith's vision went black.
I thought long and hard about this chapter. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 2: The Mistake Cloud laid Aerith on the rock ground. He knew she would die to protect him. He could never bear with himself if he let that happen. After a few minutes walk up the rough landscape, the blond found the destroyed town. As he made his way through the streets, Cloud found something familiar. His home. It had no damages or scratches as if the dreadful night had never happen. Soon he came to the town square, the spot were he felt him. Suddenly, a jolt of pain came to his chest. It was all most like a heart-attack, making him scream in pain. The blond fell to the ground as the pain stopped. Was it Sephiroth's doing? He slowly got up, even with all his chest muscles giving him more pain. "So you decided to come and face me" The sliver haired man flew down in front of the blond, smiling his evil smile. As Cloud finally got to his feet, Sephiroth started to chuckle. "What's so funny?" "The fact I have face a thing like you." Suddenly, all the anger that was kept inside the blond broke lose. He grabbed his sword and charged at the sliver haired man. As Cloud swung his sword, Sephiroth gracefully walked backwards as he dodged the swing. But the blond didn't give up. He repeatedly tried to stab his target, but just like the first time, he kept missing. After a few minutes of swinging, Sephiroth was backed into a corner. "Oh" the one winged angel said emotionlessly "It seems I'm trapped. The a dark light appeared from his his left hand, slowly molding into the shape of sword. ding! Metals coiled as Cloud blocked the attack. When he finally he pushed him back, he was gone. So thats what you're playing, hu? Suddenly, his wing popped out and he was in the air, face to face with him. Without any words, thy both came at each other. Metals coiled over and over again. After minutes of fighting Cloud was able to pierce Sephiroth right arm. The blond smiled as he pulled the blade out of the mans arm and aimed to his heart whe- "Cloooud!" A female voice was calling him. he turned his head to the right an saw Aerith. What the hell are you doing here? Cloud was sacred that she would get hurt but before he was able to say anything, something pierced him in the chest. He was done for. He let go of the buster sword as his muscles gave up. Sephiroth tilted his blade to the ground and slowly the blond slide off. Aerith ran and caught Cloud just before he hit the ground. "Now have the same fate as Zack!" yelled Sephiroth as flew away. "Cloud" cried Aerith, "Please don't die, I love you!" He looked over to her and smiled "g-good b-bye, Aerith." His eyes closed and his breathing became slower and slower. Aerith became wide eyed and fell on top of him,crying . "Cccclooouddd!"
