Video My Last Breath

Discussion in 'Production Studio' started by Fayt-Harkwind, Jan 12, 2009.

  1. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    This is my latest video and also my HD test. I welcome constructive critizism and tips but please no burning or noob speak (meaning no "OMFG I Hate this vid and I hate you *has spazam*") And please be honest no "OMG THIS FUCKING AMAZING" because I know it isn't that good.

    Remember to read the discription box and make sure you put it in HD for the true quality.

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  2. jojoj13 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    OMG! This iz so good!

    ...

    Sorry, can't help it.

    Now where was I?

    Oh yeah, It's good I can tell.

    Still, you could at least work on making effects.

    I know it's a pain, but you know.

    It's kind of plain without it.

    And yeah, work on panning and cropping.

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  3. Spunk Ransom you're already perfect

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    It's pretty good,
    but add some effects.
    Also, it seemed that you just let several scenes run through,
    which was sort of boring. If you're going to to do that, add some stuff to them to make them more interesting.