Traditional Art My KH comics!

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  1. james7171999 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    _Moved to Graphic Art

    Anyway, I do think you should try making these in a higher quality image program (like Photoshop), but as of right now they're pretty adorable. xD

    It seems like more of a slice of life comic for the Organization and is doing a better job showing the rest of the Org. than Days already.

    My only qualms right now would have to be the hairstyle of the characters, as they don't look quite too detailed (which is probably due to MS Paint), and sometimes they look a bit blocky. Other than that though, I thin you did a good job. c:
     
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    These were funny xD, sure they could have more detail but to be honest, I quite like the simplicity of them. You can tell who each character is and what they are doing. You've presented the facial expressions well so you can see when they are angry and so on.

    However, you could try and put a bit more detail in them, like you could give them the cloak, even if it is just a black triangle underneath them. You could try drawing them Chibi style since that isn't hard. Overall, I think these are good and have potential. Keep practising.
     
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    Hahaha! I liked these. The First gave me such a good laugh (the one with Larxene as a Pikachu due to Vexen), as well did the last one because I could imagine it actually happening between the members of the organization in a day in the castle x)

    I have to agree with Ienzo here. It's very good that you've gotten the hair right. We can tell who's who. Also with the expressions. They're exaggerated, and I like it. It's very clear. I say, just keep practicing. The funny plots to these comics are very good and I think the simplicity in your drawings suit it. Try adding more detail in, little by little and in your own time. Just keep drawing and drawing and drawing. You'll be super surprised on how far you've improved in no time, I'm sure. Just be open to changes in your style and try out new things - you could surprise yourself on what you can do. Please try to also use another program, it gets a little pixelized. However, very adorable and funny comics. Good job, I enjoyed these c:
     
  5. james7171999 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Well I'm not good but I'm not good at drawing the orginization members and I don't have Photoshop so Paint is all I have.I'll try better and I'll post more comics soon but the only down-side is SCHOOL.

    Here are 4 better comics I made that you can freely use for whatever.

    http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=2948&attachmentid=28200

    http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=2948&attachmentid=28201

    http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=2948&attachmentid=28202

    http://www.kh-vids.net/album.php?albumid=2948&attachmentid=28203

    I'v made them better with more detail

    P.S you won't be expecting anymore for some time.