My hate for you

Don’t be shocked that I hate you so
Even if I have no reason to
Nothing you can do will change the hate that fills my heart
Every time I look at you
I care not what happens to you
For I will not moan if you were to die
That is how much I hate you so

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Thanks to RikuSoraKairiOwn for his help, I asked him to give me an emotion to write about and he gave me hate, so thanks RikuSoraKairiOwn

 

It's good, but not that good. And i think it's too small. You have make way better poems than this.

 

It's forceful and sent a shudder down my spine as I read it. A good poem.

 

no bad...

Not bad.

(word word)

 

Thanks you three, I had a bit of writers block again so that's why this isn't as good as my best

 

Lines are good apart from #3 and the two last ones, they kinda ruin it and it's flow.