Digital Art My first sig, so proud.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Clawtooth, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    YAY I made a siggy ^_^

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    CnC but if you ask me to do something to make it better dirct me to a tut to show me how plz.

    Kudos to Misty for showing me the rule of thirds which I (hope) I used.
     
  2. mcFabulous27 Destiny Islands Resident

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    this is actually pretty good for a first, looks like you have a good idea of rule of thirds and of lighting. the colors in regards to the render versus the sig itself contrast nicely, as red and green compliment each other well being opposites on the color spectrum. the text is subtle, and although it doesn't necessarily fit, I still feel obligated to give you some credit for that.
    honestly, I really think that you have potential. good luck in the future :)
     
  3. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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    i like it mostly that my favorite part in KH1 is deep jungle and the grass in there reminds me of Deep Jungle but you could take that light thats on it off and the text could be a different color and not so wavy but other than that i like it and i KNOW you can make some really good sig in the future

    P.S. what does the text say
     
  4. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    You have some potential ;D

    Mcfab said all the good CnC >:, just make the canvas a little smaller next time, the lighting is good and follows the lights and shadows, I saw darken a little the right, also, the positioning of the render follows the rule of thrids, just blend the render a little more, it has depth, which is good ^_^.
     
  5. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    The text says Hikari.
     
  6. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    wow, first huh, that looks awesome :D

    Just some tips, more colour, too much green in the background, but it is done nicely, the render is amazing! I like that you used a very clear and nice looking render, and the positioning is nice too. Just make the size smaller (the whole signature).

    I love the text and how you used it, just make it bolder.

    But great job ;D
     
  7. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    Thanks for the possitive comments and CnC

    Here's my second siggy ^_^

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    As you can see, I downloaded some brushes, I like the feather ones.

    I downloaded some nore and here's a Kairi sig, using some heart brushes

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  8. Misty gimme kiss

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    Wow. There is some definite potential. You're off to a very good start.

    Firstly, read some tutorials. Tutorials help. Period. You won't learn a thing without them.

    Secondly, you've fixed the canvas size thing, which is nice.

    Your text isn't too horrible for a graphics newb either.

    Keep trying. You've got potential. :noworries:
     
  9. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    Thank you ^^.

    somehow I had the thing set on CM insted of Pixels ^_^;
     
  10. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Hey this actually isn't bad. I see you tried to create a light source to benefit the stock, which I hardly see on a first.

    For next time, try keeping it smaller. 400 x 100 (width x height) is usually a good size. If you ever resize your stocks, go image>image size and resize them that way (before you drag them onto your sig).

    But yeah. Good job. Keep it up! :D
     
  11. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    I folowed a tut. I got this.

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    The stick was meant to be a sprite but I think it worked.
     
  12. mcFabulous27 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Way too much going on, no real focus, and the render doesn't really show :( As a result, there's no lighting or flow. Both are essential to all art. The text is pretty awful as well, but it's not as important.
    Sorry, not a fan of this one. :/
     
  13. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    Yea, I think I should have used a Sprite and erased more of the C4D.

    I followed another tut and came up with this. I like it, taught me some new stuff.

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