Digital Art My First Sig (Again)

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Advent, Aug 8, 2008.

  1. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    I took the advice of several of you guys here and I made the background a little less bland. So what do you think?

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  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    well everyone gotta start somewhere.

    the stock, its not blending properly, i think the background looks too crowded with effects.

    this would be a good thing, if they blended.

    just keep going, youll be making good stuff in no time.
     
  3. Explode Who?!

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    The symbol in the backround looks a bit out of place. It might work if you make it a little bigger. I agree with Chervalier, the colors need more blending, maybe you can have the red and blue swirling together. Or maybe just add more blue, because that area of black sets the visual weight off balance.
     
  4. tofuman Twilight Town Denizen

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    and this one is mine