My first poem... xD

Miss You

I stand here alone
So cold... so cold
Still waiting for your warmth
To light up my inner match

You're gone now
My once map is now lost
Without you I am lost
Please, please show me the path
The path to help me move on

You say you just wish to be friends
You don't realize how much
How much more I want
You are my sucker
And I am your greedy child

I want you
I want your soft lips to touch mine
Once more... just once more

Agian I stand here in the cold
I might die...
but what does it matter?
I'm lost without you
Oh so lost..........




Oh look... it's raining


CnC?

 

Oh little bro, that is so beautiful.

This bit was my favourite part, it really struck a chord with me as I know exactly that feeling.

A very thoughtful piece, full of emotion and you expressed it beautifully. ​

 

Cool........ I guess...... I like rhyming ones better! :)
there cool!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)

 

I never knew you could be so poetic. 10.5/10

 

Thanks everyone. I'm sorry Kay you feel the same way. D:


Burmp. :D

 

OMG that had me on the verge of tears :( that was such a beautiful poem and it was like about love and a guy wrote it which is just like wow cuz it has such a powerful meaning its awesome :) btw who is the lucky person? and u sure u okay cuz if not i noe how u feel maybe i can help u

 

Yush I love when people ask questions. :D


Um it was towards no one. And it had no meaning towards me. I just didnt want to say that because it'd kill it. D: