Video my first amv

1. i know it sucks, i'm just too lazy to change it
2. it cuts off after the fight with marluxia (too lazy to finish :D )
3. i wanted the audio from the clips of the words you know "scattered dreams blah blah" but it doesn't work on movie maker 1.1
4. i like constructive criticism not just listing mistakes
5. did you like anything at all?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IUOAk994OOA

 

What?! You should finish it--it's incredible until you cut it off at Marluxia! Your transitions are very clean cut. I loved it when Sora was going after Riku but then it switched to the scene with Marluxia.

Your timing is precise as well. For every magnificent stroke of chord there's something in the video that matches it, like Riku and Sora clashing blades and such. For your first AMV, this was magnificent.

Not including the whole cut off part, I give an 8.7/10 ^^

 

wow. thanks! haha seriously your comment made my whole day.
i'll keep working on it then. i didn't want to waste my time making something bad but your comment has changed my mind. thanks

 

You should definitely finish it! I loved how you paralelled the KH1 Sora dive and the KH2 Roxas dive. I obviously knew from the beginning it was a reference, but I didn't realize how exact it was until now.

 

haha i'll finish it. thanks for commenting

 

I wanna see the rest... TT^TT

 

Not bad so far for a first one, though it doesn't leave much to the imagination, since you are using only one clip and that is the intro (and some of the intro to KH1), and also you are using the intro song, personally I don't like it when people use the soundtrack to the source material, it's a lack of originality, but since it is your first one i can let it slide :). Try using a variety of scenes, keep the viewer interested, not just rearrange the intro. Timing was decent, though it would of been better if you timed it to more beats more often, though you did hit some key beats.

But for a first one it is looking good, alot of first AMV's i've seen are much worst, this one has potenial.

 

that's preaty good, for a firsty! lol

 

that was a really good vid! seriously, FINISH IT!!

 

aw thanks you guys :)

thanks for the tips, i know what song i'm going to use for my next amv :D