I drew this the other day, and I was kinda iffy on putting it on here. :/ It's just an OC I thought of in imagination. CnC and stuff. :]
I like her dress and legs. But her face bothers me. I think it's the eyes or something. D8 And I think in the position she's in her 'chest' should be out alittle more. Even if it's flat, [when it's not] there chests are out.. sorta. /:
I kinda had Pride And Prejudice on the brain when I drew this, so I loved their style of clothing. And how they style makes they're chest smaller in the dresses they have on. Her face does seem a bit off, yes. :B|: Thanks though. :<3:
It's good. Maybe you need to work on drawing the hair maybe. And her arm looks long and bent. Is she sweating? :O The face does also bother too, not only the eyes, but the eyebrows too. Everything is good though, keep up the good work.
I like it quite a bit, but as others have said try working on the face. The overall shape is okay, but they eyes are a bit off... Too large, maybe? It's a great drawing overall, though. Kudos.
Here's my cnc. Okay, so first of all, everytime I look at your art, I always think it looks like you traced because of the unsteady-ness of the lines. Do you trace? Or are you using a reference or what? Her arms are disturbingly disproportionate to the body and legs. They're ways too skinny and a little long. The back arm shouldn't be as long as the one towards the front because it's further back and appears shorter, but you have it almost longer than the one in front. I know it's anime style, but the eyes are quite large since they take up half of the forehead. Try lowering them and making them smaller. Also her breast seem to be lower than they should be. For the hands, they are too chubby for this type of character.
I use a refrence, but I go over the drawing a few times so the scanner can pick up something. I understand the eyes, I was preying on getting more attention to the dress/body structure. As long for the breasts, I tried doing some sort of Model like pose, and most clothing on them are a bit lower then what they normally are. Yeah, her arms are a bit long. Thanks for the CnC now. :noworries:
