Traditional Art My Drawing of Marluxia

I made this because I was bored. Tell me what you think.

 

His head is a bit big and I would lengthen his hair so that it is much longer like it actually is. I do like how you made his eyes, and you did a nice job shading the organization cloak. Good job. :3

 

No offense, but he doesn't look much like Marluxia to me xD

Is he meant to be a chibi? His head is huge compared to his body and his hands are far too small. As he is looking to the left you may want to reposition his hair so that his face isnt out of proportion. Your shading is decent and the weapon looks good but if this guy is meant to be Marluxia I suggest bigger hair.

Mind the arms too, theyre...short to say the least. His left arm seems shrunk compared to the bent one.

 

I don't think it looks much like Marluxia at all.
Although,there are so good points to this drawing;there are many bad ones also.
Like the size of his head bothers me;it's way to big...Even for a chibi (if that's what you are going for)

The right arm is way too short.I think it should have been longer(compared to the bent one)

It's weird but the weapon looks traced next to the way you drew the hands and body.
The hair length and volume is not what it should be either.

Just needs a bit of work that's all. :3