Errm....okay.... The backgrounds look a little too....default-ish. You know what I mean? Like, you can choose a set of backgrounds off the program your using. That's what I mean. I think it's because of the pattern-style you put into it. But besides the background, your render doesn't blend at all, and is a bit low quality. I would suggest finding one off of www.planetrenders.net. I don't see any effects to make it look any interesting. The text is plain, doesn't match the background so well. I would suggest looking at different fonts. Try something new, a new style, new effect, something you've never used before. Experiment.
A: I was always bad experimenting, but I will try. B: I took the image from planetrenders, it was the only that I found.
agreed. the render looks a bit like its off a fake pokemon card or something, so, yeah, check out planet renders. arial is a bit plain, and the white clashes a bit too much. might want to grey it, or change the colour completely and DEFINATELY change the font. that is all. EDIT: you got it of planetrenders????
*Nods in agreement* There not bad, but, more then one? Just hurts my head. And then, ones darker then the other..they look weird xDD JK! The second one is blurry, and it makes the sigg look..Blurry! But besides that one, there all alright... I guess. >.>
Well first thing, It's always good to get a good quality render. They are always easier to work with and look good. Next is your background. It's a nice background and all, but the colors and designs just dont go with the render. Always try to use colors that match or compliment the render. The effect in the palm the the 2nd and 3rd versions are good. They give a sense of some action to the signature. Lastly your text could use some working with. Get a good amount of fonts because it's good to have a font that matches the style(techno, curvy, weird, etc.). The white color isnt so bad because it's easy to see and doesnt stick out like other light colors would. But you should try to apply a softlight filter on the text, that way it'll be more transparent and it'll have the design of what's under it.
