(Songwriters:Liz D and Jake) You used think that all I'd care about, Was kissing you goodbye and playing with your hair, But now I see, There's another side to me, One which I don't want you to see, And now I'm not the same but maybe you need to find me. Chorus: I don't want to live forever, I just want to be the last to know, Don't want too many chances, To not take the last train home, Your tears inside of me, I see, The pictures, I'm missing (oh oh oh), Yeah I'm missing. Walking down the old streets, Staring at the sun going down each day, And I know all I'll find is more disappointment, I know what I'll find is not going to help my development, I've changed so much, Tried to run away from you, But I still feel your touch. Chorus: I don't want to live forever, I just want to be the last to know, Don't want too many chances, To not take the last train home, Your tears inside of me, I see, The pictures, I'm missing (oh oh oh), Yeah I'm missing. When I don't want to live forever, That means my time's going to be up soon, Oh this I know, Can't get rid of us two together, Need to find my way back home! It's no use if I'm lost, And you're crying too, I'm making my way back to you. Chorus: I don't want to live forever, I just want to be the last to know, Don't want too many chances, To not take the last train home, Your tears inside of me, I see, The pictures, I'm missing (oh oh oh), Yeah I'm missing. Oh oh oh, No no, I'm home, Not missing, no more.
There are some grammar errors but besides that it's lovely. There's depth of emotion here and I can feel it. You put some effort into it and that's what makes it live. 8D Awesome work.
