Missed?

Discussion in 'Archives' started by AlexleHoshi, Apr 21, 2007.

  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Will I be missed if I just lied down and died
    I feel like people hate me but I know that is a lie
    I always feel like the worst has happen to me
    When in fact the best has
    I feel like no one sees me
    No matter where I am
    Won't you show me?
    That I am just being silly
    Show me the light
    Out of my darkness

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    Am not sure if I've posted this poem before since I wrote it last year, if I have please tell me, anyways enjoy
     
  2. Crispers Beep Boop

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    wow i like it but its really sad
    but then again i live with sad poems from my friends
    lol
    anyways i like it
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks, yeah I should of said I wasn't in a good mood when I wrote thid
     
  4. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That is so beautiful and sad. I think everyone thinks this at some point, and you have described it wonderfully.

    I like to think we live on in the hearts of those who love us.