(This is just a section of a really big Kingdom Hearts story my friend and I made up) Summary: Little after the defeat of the organization and the return of the gang, a long lost but evil sorcerer namely CoM (Creater of Magic) or preferably called Ansem's Master reigned havok amongst the worlds after his first two apprentices, Yen Sid and Merlin, manage to temporarily freeze him in time. Long story short, he wanted to obtain complete mastry over powerful magic within a book called the Book of Forbidden Spells. With it, he can create extreme chaos thats almost impossible to stop. Over the years, he has been locked away in Hollow Bastion, or Radiant Garden, since it was known to be the world with the greatest amount of light at the time. But as darkness began to grow into the world, he managed to break free from this time barrier although the darkness was close to none. With his mastry over the Book of Forbidden Spells incomplete, he needed more time and knowledge. But he also predicted that it would cause obvious attention which could easily attract his former apprentices who he guessed were extremely powerful at the time. So he became the teacher of another aspiring scientist, Ansem the Wise. Knowing about his fondness about the heart, CoM thought he could use Ansem to fasten his progress. And within 2 years, Ansem grew to an extraordinary scientist with vast knowledge. However, CoM faked suicide in front of Ansem the Wise. Thinking that his old master was dead within the mysterious abyss of Radiant Garden, Ansem the Wise told no one about the incident and swore an oath to work even harder in his research. After Ansem's death in the world that never was, CoM managed to look at his apprentice's hidden notes, the most secret part which only him and Ansem knew of. Along with his own progress of mastry and the notes, he managed to find out how to use the basic spells. Around the time Sora finished off the organization, CoM mastered 3 of the basic spells which could only be used once [ever]. He managed to put a curse of foul darkness on the keyblade causing it to weaken extremely. He also managed to unseal the the keyholes sealed by the keyblades from the previous journeys which resurrected Organization 13 [except Xemnas and Xehenort because they were both locked too deeply into the darkness which required a much more advanced spell] since darkness became slightly dominant over the worlds which disturbed the balance of nothingness. He also managed to increase the darkness within 2 people's hearts that has ever been affected by the darkness but not strongly enough to create a nobody. So he created a nobody from Cloud [who once utilized the power of darkness to seek out Sephiroth] later named Xoldku; and Riku [since he was once under Xehenort temporary control] later named Kirux. They both joined the new Organization 13 since Roxas betrayed the Organization once again because he had a special feeling in his memory since he was a "special" nobody. His memory reminded him that he once heard the Organization plotting to use Sora's powers over keyblade control [which is technically his powers as well] to obtain a stronger Kingdom Hearts little bit after their resurrection. This caused Roxas to embark to Castle Oblivion to revisit some more of Sora's memories, hoping to find some answers but was welcomed by the new and improved Organization. However, in the end CoM planned to USE the organization to do some dirty work for him so he can stall for more time to master some more advance spells, some which required the keyblade as well as powers within Kingdom Hearts... Meanwhile, Donald and Goofy received an order from King Mickey that there was once again a disburbance within the worlds. He planned to have Sora, Donald, and Goofy to investigate the problems. Riku, however, was lost during the process of the forbidden spell. He was helplessly consumed by the spell's darkness which transported him to a world of uttmost nothingness. But later on, Riku met up with the King and together, they looked for the stolen pages within the sacred book of their castle, Book of the Chasers. [during his journey, he faces a new specie called the darkless, the light side of a heartless which attacks those with darkness within them no matter how small. And since Riku was recently attacked by the spell, his heart attracted more darkless because his darkness was more bigger than normal.] At the same time, Sora, Donald, and Goofy wanted to head over Disney Castle hoping to ask the king for a start. However, they were thrown off course and thats when Sora realized the tainted darkness within the keyblade. A little later, Merlin explained a little about some of the past events. He guessed it was CoM who did it. But after a long period, Merlin's magic grew weaker and knew he was unable to stop CoM. So he told Sora about several effects that followed the cursed keyblade such as the unlocking of the worlds' keyhole. Sora realized by relocking more keyholes, the darkness loosen causing the keyblade to regain its strength little by little and it also led them closer to CoM secret wearabouts. And so, Sora visits Midgar, hoping to revive the keyblade more and do what the gang at Hollow Bastion asked: to look for Cloud and Tifa who are in Midgar looking for missing Aerith... (Begins with the entrance into the church in Advent Children) "Is this really the right world?" Sora asked Donald and Goofy. "Its seems a little different from what the guys had explained on their short visit here." "Hmm, well we should at least take a look. After all, it seems correct based on our Gummy detector." Donald added. "Hey, there's a big building over there. Lets go check it out." Goofy stated. "Yeah." Sora agreed as they ran towards the church... (To be continued.....soon....I hope)
Ok. First off this is a really intresting Idea. I had always wanted Sora and the Gang to visit the FF worlds in the game such as Midgar or Bezell (from FFx) so this really peeked my intrest. The Background story is wonderful. Of course Ansem would have had a master (Dunno if he would have been a Mage but whatever) and although I wasn't sure about the Opposite Heartless... I am warming up to the idea. However, this seems more like a giant summary rather than a Story. It like it's fallen inbetween Theroy for the next games and your own ideas. But it just too much fact dump and not enough filling. We want to SEE these things happen not just hear about them. Show don't tell. Don't be offended. I'm naturally blunt and not just going to pat you on the head and said "Good Job scout!" because that'd make you feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside. :| Because I think you have an awesome story working out here but that's what i want to read- The Story! This summary has really intrested me and now I want you to continue. xD See you around the Forum.
Believe me, you do NOT wana hear the entire story.... Its WAAAYYYY too long. The summary is long cuz the actual backstory is even longer... As for the part where you said Show not Tell, my friend and I already agreed NOT to show too much of the backstory about CoM and everything, which is why we really gave enough info for others 2 catch up on basic details of how the past causes the undergoing journey. Also, my friend and I have thought it over that by the time Sora visits Midgar, he would already be more than halfway done with his journey. I wanted to do this as a spotlight cuz all the other stories is the usual going around Disney Worlds and stuff which aren't as exciting.
Length isn't an issue, if people like reading it. The fic in my sig is only half finished (in fact, it may be even less than that) and it's over 68,000+ words so far. Yet, people are still reading it. XD. Don't worry about length, honestly.
