Metaphor Poem

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  1. Misty gimme kiss

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    ... type thing. :3

    We had to write one in English about an emotion or something, and I really liked how mine turned out. The emotion I choose was Happiness. 8D
    Btw, there are some kind of random things *like the word yellow in there* but that's because I needed to shove more poetic devices in.



    It is the opening of tulips on the first day of Spring;
    It is the sun peaking through the gray storm clouds.
    It is being able to do your own thing.
    It is never knowing dismay...
    It is the feeling of standing out in a crowd.
    It's the quiet serenity of a baby's slumber.
    It is the yellow, lighthearted laughter of a child;
    It is a beautiful smile.
    It's living without warning;
    It is the sole reason to continue on
    to the next morning.
     
  2. Destined Working for WDW

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    I like this poem and it really captures the emotion of happiness in the littlest of ways, good job. I especially like the wording of the three lines above. Great work.