It looks too plain. Try mutting SOra's memories on the tape. ^^ It'll look more memory-istic to give you the memory like feeling. But nice job. ^^
I think maybe Sora should be more visible. He looks weird... o_o Other then that, I agree with what Xephos said. Maybe some pics from the opening? Great Job, though. (:
If Sora was a bit more "solid" then it would look alot better. Other than that, I love the film in the picture.
