I like this one alot.the focus and the flow works well here.the lighting matchs up also.the simple BG is always effective.Text could use a little work.But this is awesome tag.
The only thing I see wrong is the text, but I don't know how you could improve since I'm not very good at text. For once, it doesn't look COMPLETELY random, and I like that. Simplicity is awesome.
I dont actually I like the ones that are completely abstract better.... I really like the designs on the back, and yeah try making the text different.
Lomfg that sig is shmexy. Nice flow, but personally i like the text lol. I dont see whats wrong with it. Nice job dude.