apart from the white i think it looks nice... the white thingy ruins the most... d'you think you can take it away?
The second version looks five times better without the white "U" covering over the gun. Colors blend well and the pen tooling is simple.
it looks really good. the color choices are really good and the mixes look awesome. good render.like the pen in the background.the graphics of the background look amazing.keep up the good work.
Pentooling needs to go. Also, erase the edges of the render with a soft brush. Just the parts that seem white and don't erase too much. Oh and it looks better without text.
