Okay so i thought this would be fun It may not be so good seeing as though im not good at writing story's but lets see how it goes The title says it all!! :D ~ Chapter 1 - A Bad Morning ~ Marluxia woke up to a banging noise outside his door. The room was still dark, that meant it would either be early in the morning or late at night. He slowly got out of bed, putting his slippers on and slowly walked to the door. He was wearing his neat, pink PJ's "Who is it.." He said tiredly "Im trying to sleep" His voice was weak "Bark Bark!" Was the reply " What the......." Marluxia opened the door The first thing he saw was a black and white dog that was up to his knees The dog pounced on him and licked him all over his face "Yuck! Get off me dog!" Marluxia pushed the dog off him and looked at it "Oh, sorry about that Marly." Marluxia heard a voice that sounded like Xigbar He must of gotten woken up too "We just got a new dog. Apparently there has been some 'intruders' in the castle and Xemnas has ordered me to get a dog to sniff them out" Xigbar said while helping Marluxia up. Xigbar was wearing his White PJ's with black stripes all over " His name is Tiny!" Xigbar smiled as he looked at the dog Marluxia nearly laughed 'Tiny, yeah right more like Gigantic!' He thought as he looked at his alarm clock. It was 7:15 Am "So it has kept you up all morning?" Marluxia asked "Well not all morning it was recking your flower garden before so that kept it busy!" Xigbar Replied Marluxia was trying to keep calm "I-it did what?......." There was a minute silence Then Xigbar finally spoke "U-umm....You know what? I might put him away in my room okay?" And Xigbar ran off with 'Tiny' An hour later Marluxia was neatly dressed in his black Organization coat. He went into the kitchen where everyone was eating breakfast Marluxia looked in the cupboard for his favorite cereal. There was none left. "Ummm....Where is my cereal?" Marluxia asked anyone who was listening "Oh! Sorry about that Marly there was none of my cereal so i ate some on yours, hope you dont mind!" Demyx replied to him "You know how i dont like toast...Right?" Demyx was reading his comics "Okay....I will have toast then" He looked in the cupboard for the bread. There were only two pieces He put them in the toaster then looked for the butter While he was looking the toaster popped his toast up But the toast flew in the air and hit Marluxia in the head "Ouch!" He looked around, then at the bread He popped them back in and kept looking for the butter. The cupboard was full of all kinds of stuff so it was hard to find want you wanted The bread popped back up and hit Marluxia in the head again Marluxia could hear giggles from the other Organization members He sighed and put the bread back in the toaster then kept looking for the butter "Okay so where is the butter?" Marluxia asked the others while turning around The bread popped back up and hit Marluxia in the eye The Organization laughed Marluxia was trying to stay calm once again "Fine then i will just have an apple for breakfast" And so Marluxia stomped off while grabbing a apple from the fruit bowl "Well he is in a good mood today isint he?" Axel commented The Organization laughed once more Marluxia had finished his apple and threw it in the bin He then walked to his flower garden to see how badly recked it was It was horrible "I swear im going to KILL Xigbar and that dog" Marluxia's fist was tightly closed Marluxia sighed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So how was it? I might make it longer to so dont worry Comments please!! Also I need an idea for next chapter Because you cant post polls anymore i will just ask for your ideas!
My only problem with the story. XD I'd REEEEALLY like to see more detail there. Other than that, it's prett pimpin'. XD I KNOW WHAT YOU COULD DO FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER!!! XDDD It's something I've been meaning to do for a while now... >3 Demyx and Axel could be playing in the halls or something, and Marluxia, who just HAPPENEDS to be walking past, gets hit in the face with a huge water-ball! And that, liek, TOTALLY messes up his hair! >D So he's all, "YOU DUMBASSES!!!" and stomps off to go fix it again, when he finds out that ALL OF HIS HAIR PRODUCTS ARE GONE!!! O.o; As it would have it, Larxene stole it, and... Well... There's no arguing with her, even if she DOES steal your stuff. O.o; Unless... of course... You wanna go through the rest of your life with a colostomy bag... >.>; HOPE THAT HELPED! XDDD
I really like it, could have added more detail to some parts but it was still quite good. Tiny the dog LOL. Can't wait for Chapter 2.
