Digital Art .Marluxia?! Flowers of D00M.

Well, for the sotw. I need some CnC for it, and what I should fix.



CnC appreciated :]]

 

it looks nice
but i think you made it too bright
other then that it looks good

 

This is amazingly smexxi, but it's a bit blank on the right side and I also think you should put some color into the swirly thing at the bottom, it's too bright for me.

 

nice i think

 

Very nice, it looks like something was painted behind it, very well done O_o. The right is very blank though, I would suggest filling that up with something just a bit, but not too much of it. You don't want it too busy. And the light thing at the bottom, it's kinda bright, and the shape goes well with the rest of it, the very white brightness of it doesn't. Like Xiggy said, I would suggest adding a bit of color to it.

Otherwise, I really like this.

 

Marly=oversharpened
The text.... needs to be fixed up....
Try and make it more 3d, or try adding sime texture to to it, and make it smaller.
Speaking of texture's, I say add one to the bg, but make it light.
And:
Oh no! Where's his Scythe?!!? I see the pole, but not the blade. Make it more aparrent.
And that little lighting lights up the whole tag? watthafak? Needs moar shading.
Now, this tag needs sum depth.....
DeSharpen focal a bit, blur, add debris, blur some of them, and you may brush with a big floral brush, in black, so it goes across the tag, and lower opacity. I think that would look pretty hawt, but wut do I know, eh?
Oh yeah, make more solid and apparent effects, like not smudging so much.
On a side note:
I have tried to make 2 tags for sotw, but GIMP and PS crashed before I could save. FAK.