I'm still not very good but I do rather like this one. Might as well post them at least. Spoiler: V1 Spoiler: V2 Spoiler: V3 Spoiler: V4 Spoiler: V5
It looks to me that each one gets brighter. All in all i do like the position of the piece, the stock and the colors used. But if i had to pick one, i would choose the fifth one. I like seeing the detail in the back, and it's easy to see it the best in the fifth piece, plus it brings out the gal a little more. Good job!
I think that I like the first one the most because it doesn't have the two borders, but overall, I feel these are too dark, that the black on the left is just kinda . . . meh, there y'know? One thing I did like about the others was the word 'malice' on it, the see-through effect that you've put on it. You did a good job with it, but I think that it could be a bit lighter. c:
Thank you~! Also thank you. I was worried about it being too dark and plain but I liked the overall effect and thus I posted it. Next time I will either work more on the borders are just simply leave them out. Also, not too good with text so I'm glad you like it. Again, thank you, you two. <3
These look pretty sweet, I especially like the piece and it's position, as well as the colours that you used for the background as they really seem to bring out the feeling that the image displays. The black to the right also gives it a lot of depth and adds to the effect. The text is also very well placed and really seems to fit. Overall, Great Job! Keep it up!!!
The text takes away from the imagine. It looks like watermark, and we know how tacky those can be. Try making the contrast between the left right stronger and make it flow instead of being so flat like it is. When you have flow, you can place your text rightly, or you can use your text to make a focal point. Putting it in the center without symmetry is bad form. It is too distracting and it is not beautiful enough to be distracting.
