Malena, beautiful name right? Kind of back, after a long effort of trying to settle in my new college life. \o\ Look forward to more of my work <3
Gorgeous name indeed, and gorgeous piece too!! It's always awesome to see your work Taffy-dear c: I love how it looks sketchy and a bit on realism. There's something a tiny bit off on the lips for me, they're lovely but the placement is the tiniest bit off. Or maybe it's just me (probs). I love how you drew this though - so amazing. Her hair and eyes (those eyelashes!!) are my favourite. Amazing as always c: <3
Some things with it bother me, but that's just me. Im just going to blabber off. I think the hair could use some more form, you know? It feels like the hair are only lines, they need more shape. The chin is too small in my opinion, and then there's the neck. I quickly did one of those red line thingies, so. Red <--- Just....some red lines. Ughhhhh Im a perfectionist....I want to change the red lines. ****.
Hey Dinny <3 Loved your work, which I commented on in tumblr :] Thank you for your nice critque, I will look out for that. ^-^ Thank you very much. I can see now What I have been doing wrong. Will try to fix it all :P Thank you again.
I know I pointed out obvious things, like the neck, but I just felt like posting my thoughts on your work. (plus a red line sketch. Never done one of those) And yeah, thanks to you, too.
