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Second attempt at Gimp... plain and simple +fails hardcore.
Leave me some tips or a dash of CnC.

~kthanx

 

Take away your blaring lightsoucres. It was the main source of failure in your first one, and it takes away a lot from this one as well. That's all I really have to say before you put more affects into your works.

 

I like how the render copies fades untill is matches the background, kinda cool actually. The light source is way too blinding as Cin said. Try using a soft white brush on soft light or overlay (or whatever the gimp equivalent of that is). The background could use some more work and a little effects would be sweet. Maybe some pentooling or C4D's, which could help accentuate the nice flow thats already there. Pretty good for your second try though. Most people just take a picture and add text on it lol.

 

very retro, I actually kind of like this. add in some cmy/k colors if you want, that would probably add quite a bit to it.

 

ahahaha hayleyyyyyy.

:3

Anyway, the concept is good, but the execution needs some work. Effects are more choppy than an axe (ohohoho), and the last hayleyarm needs to be feathered. Text, too. I'd like to see some purple in this one. Not sure why. :3

Note: I was not on any illegal substances during this post.