Verse 1: Love is nothing but a four letter lie That I am forced to believe in But love doesn't believe in me It's why I've cried so many tears And after all these years, I still try To find something that doesn't exist Something like Chorus: You are just another prince from another fairytale Trying to sweep me off my feet Well, it ain't working out too well 'Cause I don't believe you're truly in love with me (Verse 1 x1) (Chorus x1) Bridge: Love is a major sacrifice of your life For the one you want and need But I am nobody to the world Just another heartbroken girl Who will never understand love Because it doesn't understand me (Chorus x2) And there's no such thing as true love
Hmm. Very good, I liked how everything fit, rhymed, and worked out nicely. Try to make it even more rhyming, because if you see verse 1, your rhyming with 'lie' and 'try' took 3 lines. It should only take 1.
Thanks. And I wasn't trying to rhyme "lie" and try". It was supposed to be "why" and "try". It's very mixed up unlike most of my songs.
