Love

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Luna561, May 6, 2008.

  1. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    What is love?
    Is it a phase that people use?
    Is it a word that people use to hurt others?
    No.
    It is a word that people use to express one's feeling.
    How can love be blocked?
    Simple.
    If one's feeling is different from another.
    If they are shy, they cannot tell their feelings.
    How can one's self tell tell true feelings the their love?
    Easy.
    Pretend they are someone you like to talk to and speak your feelings.
    How can one's heart be broken from one's love?
    The way they say 'I can only think of you as a friend.'

    How you like it.
     
  2. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    I like it. Sounds beautiful how you should do it and how you say it.
     
  3. Ansem59 Chaser

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    WOW! that was really good luna... you really out did yourself!
     
  4. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    Really? Thanks Ansem.
     
  5. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Very nice....nice subject.....I like how you kind of put both sides into the poem of love rather than just sticking to one.....good poem.....
     
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    Wow... that was beautiful... I really enjoyed reading it... and yet, it brought a tear to my eyes at the end... great job! =D
     
  7. Falling Star Gummi Ship Junkie

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    wow that was great! I really liked the description and emotion you put into it! :D
     
  8. Very Berry Gummi Ship Junkie

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    aww that was a really cute and sweet poem i like it fab job luna!! :)
     
  9. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    thank you all of you.
     
  10. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    No prob Luna. :3