Love

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    I entered a poetry contest at my school, and this is the entry I used for it... I hope it's good enough because I turned it in today! ^^' Well I hope you guys like it! :P

    Silence fills the air.
    A deep, echoed silence
    That sends chills up my spine.
    I am waiting.

    The key to my heart
    Is lost with my love.
    The comfort I once felt,
    Diminished.

    But what is love?
    A feeling of attraction?
    Or a silly game?
    Who knows.

    A thousand petals
    Litter the ground,
    The feelings of my love,
    Trapped within my heart.

    Chains suffocate me.
    I'm lost within a world of hate.
    What is love?
    I'm still waiting.
     
  2. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Glad to hear that your entry is in and I wish you the best of luck Destiny....*hug*.......good poem.....detailed description of how love can be or feel like at times.....
     
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *hugs* Thanks ^^