Love You Forever... Maybe

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  1. MARIExBRIARWOOD Destiny Islands Resident

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    Hmm.. this isn't my most favorite of poems I've ever written, but it has a deep meaning. Basically right now, my boyfriend is totally different and hard to understand, and I'm not so sure if I'm happy with him or not, but I love him so much I'm not to the point where I want to lose or leave him. I'm trying really hard to find different ways to view or deal with it, but its very hard.

    Love You Forever... Maybe

    My fingers brush against the edge
    Of something dangerous, amazing
    To you I make this honor, pledge
    To love you forever... maybe

    We never seem to have time at all
    Your compassion does not exist
    You make my heart sputter and stall
    But I'm not raptured in bliss

    Your hand never wanders or searches for mine
    But our hearts still beat together
    And still you committed the worst of crimes
    You stole my heart forever

    My heart is deeply embedded again
    Within things I just cannot understand
    But if love was always perfect and zen
    Life would be dull and bland


    This is, however, a brand new poem by me ^-^ I just finished it a few minutes ago.