Love is a *****

Discussion in 'Archives' started by GhettoXemnas, Jan 6, 2009.

  1. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    And no, this has nothing to do with me. This is just some random **** I pretty much freestyled in my head as more of a poem than a rap. Might write one more short verse for it later.

    A young man and woman stood wrapped in each other’s arms
    So deeply intertwined like a ball of yarn
    Then man looked into the girls eyes, so wonderful like a dove
    “Will you mary me? Please say you will, my loveâ€
    Just as she was about to reply
    She was swept up by a great best in the blink of an eye
    The beast brought the woman up to its monstrous face
    It looked at her with lust, its mouth agape
    Then it swallowed her whole, without a single care
    And the man jumped at him, his fists in the air
    The best swallowed him too, and then he was gone
    And then the beast laughed and said “the game is onâ€

    The man awoke in the mouth of the beast
    He knew not where he was, if it were west or east
    He walked over to the endless pit that was it’s throat
    Then looked up as the face on the tonsils began to gloat
    “You’ve already lost my friend†it said to the man
    “Shut your mouth, beast. I have a planâ€
    “Then welcome to heartbreak†said the face
    As soldiers of saliva filled the place
    The man was attacked but he fought them off as long as he could
    But everything he did seemed to be no good
    So he turned and jumped into the monsters throat
    And thus he was up the river without even a boat
    He soon reached the heart, through hacking and slashing
    All the while he heard the beast laughing
    He slashed every organ and tissue that was in his way
    And he reached his destination in what felt like a day
    He looked in awe at a space that was heartless
    Could this be the embodiment of the art of many an artist
    He began to understand, which made it more urgent that he find his love
    He would descend to the depths and with her return to above

    He arrived in the stomach, and saw his love afloat
    In the acid on ribs that she had used as a boat
    She reached out to him, and he reached to her
    She was more valuable to him than gold and fur
    She looked so amazing, he was lost in her gaze
    Then he slipped and fell into the acidic blaze
    She pulled him up and out to safety
    He looked at her eyes, so bright like daisies

    The peace was broken as a voice began to taunt him
    “Keep your love locked down†where the words sent to haunt him
    Then things turned wild and out of control
    He never imagined that this would unfold
    They were separated, she was taken upward, and him down
    He was laughed at by the beast as if he were a jester or clown
    Down through the acid, to the lower part of the beast
    He went down with the remnants of a great feast
    Into the dark
    On has half of a raft that would serve as his arc

    He awoke in a part of the body that he did not know
    He heard the sound of a voice that didn’t cease to grow
    It taunted him, “Why are you so paranoid?â€
    It came so loud from within a dark void
    “You are worried about the wrong things†said the voice
    But he didn’t care, he’d made his choice
    He made his way up, to the one he came for
    She was so high above, but he made his way to what seemed like north

    What seemed like days later, he emerged in the mouth
    He knew not for sure he had gone north or south
    But he found his love, banging on the monster’s teeth
    “Come, my love, there should be a way out underneathâ€
    “Underneath?†she asked as he replied with a grin
    “We must reach his tail through the path withinâ€
    “But first tell me, what was your answer?â€
    And then her sad “no†infected him like cancer
    And then she left for the tail, departing from the top
    And he couldn’t believe he was tricked by that heartless Robocop

    He sat there, on the tongue, as time passed him by
    Like street lights on the road as he drove right by
    He was so shocked, but then he gained his resolve
    He had a new problem that he had to go solve
    So he set out after her, so he could set things straight
    He set out in hopes of unsealing his fate

    He finally caught up to her, so beautiful yet she gave him nothing but blues
    He looked her in the eye and asked “How could you give me such bad news?â€
    But she had no reply
    Even thought she could see the tears in his eyes
    It drove him insane, that she wouldn’t even speak
    It made his mind and his body feel so weak
    He dropped to his knees in devastation
    As she strove to get out of this place of condemnation

    Before she could leave he though, he stood up as a new man
    He cried his sanity out of his head and into the tears on his hands
    “You may leave me know, but I’ll see you again
    When I do see you, we won’t be lovers or friends
    I’ll see you in my nightmares
    No more chocolates and teddy bears
    You’ve broken my heart, and it can’t be repaired
    You’ve set me adrift in a sea of despairâ€
    She looked him over, one last time
    And then she turned and left, not willing to waste time
    “Tell everyone that you know!†he called out to her
    But she kept going, not giving an answer

    The rest of his years, were spent in the heartless monster’s core
    He didn’t run, laugh, sing, dance, or love anymore
    His heart was broken, and cold, colder than the coldest winter
    It was broken in pieces as small as a splinter
    He never died, yet after that never really lived
    He just sat there, so cold, as the moments were relived


    Inspired by 808s and Heartbreak if you didn't figure it out already.