Digital Art lots of effects and text

not my original pic, but i made some edits and added lots of stuff-



Cnc?

Edit: LOL i made sora look tan.

 

this is from the manga, right? It's so cute!

I absolutely adore what you've done with the background. Insane colours and effects. I love it. The colours on sora and kairi though seem really saturated or like, burnt. i'm not too sure on the term. It's cool, but I think something more cool-ish would have worked better with the background. I also like the text, maybe an experiment of fonts would have been nice but the simplicity is also captivating. I still really like it as a whole though, it's sweet and pretty~ Great job! c:

 

Hmm...it would be much easier to critique if you could give us a link to the original image so we can compare.
Could you do that?

From what I can talk about, the white text at the top is fine. It's out of the way so it doesn't draw attention from the focal too much, which makes it work well.
The blue text at the bottom sticks out a bit too much. I think it's the difference of the colours around it which draws attention away from the focal. That's how I feel about it anyway.

But it's a job well done. Keep up these effects you have been putting in, it will help your graphic art a lot.

 

thanksboth of you,i did go all you on the effects.

@fishhat

 

I.. actually don't like this edit. You've reduced quality, made it too bright just makes it seem..ugly. Don't get me wrong, it's a good try. But you overdid the effects too way, I also think the text color doesn't fit. Try transparent text or something next time or something.

Good attempt, though. I hope to see you improve soon.