Lost Hope

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Princess Rapunzel, Oct 9, 2008.

  1. Princess Rapunzel Flower, gleam and glow

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    Look at me and tell me who you see
    A girl who quietly stands apart from the crowd
    Someone who tries to hide in the shadows
    For I see a angel with tattered wings
    Fallen from the beautiful angelic sky

    A broken angel with scars of the past
    With nothing to keep away the darkness
    Nothing but her own strenght
    To fight off the monsters born of darkness

    Mirrored in the eyes of a maiden
    Before me fate holds the weapon I wield
    Far from me, I fly into sky so beautiful, yet so dangerous
    Then He told me, "Leave behind all the tear you shed.
    Far from where all innocence lies."

    Following the blade set before me
    I counter the fears of my darkness
    Yet I weave a costume that disfigures me
    All the red of innocence gone by my hand
    Won't wash away for I am no longer a beautiful Rose of May

    But please let me wear the mask of repentance once more
    So that I can see the Roses of May once again​


    A poem I wrote for a contest at school. It's supposed to say that I'm no longer innocent as a child, referring to the team 'Rose of May'. But I hope to see that innocent again someday.
     
  2. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Wowzers! That was a very nice poem. I hope it wins in your school contest. :D
     
  3. Juicy Chaser

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    Jeez..seriously..that was beautiful. <3

    I absolutely adore and idolize you now :3

    I want to see more of your work here (:

    <333
     
  4. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Very touching. ;_; Good job!
     
  5. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Aerith, you keep on getting better and better...

    Good job. ^^
     
  6. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Wow, that is very well done. I hope you win your contest!
     
  7. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Nice! Good luck in the contest.