ok so this just randomly popped into my head a minute ago so i wrote it down... i usually never write poetry... kinda weird but i like this poem _____________________ Your words The tidal wave that breaks my heart Leaves me breathless Your words The ones I long to hear The ones soft and sweet Your words The ones I’ll never hear But a simple ‘Hello’ now and again Your laugh Contagious to those around But I’m not there Your laugh Joyous and friendly I want to hear it all day long Your eyes Seeing everything but me I’m invisible _____________________ so what does everyone think, any tips for me?
Hmmm... let me guess. You like someone alot and you won't tell them because you feel unnoticed around him? Thats what is seems to say... in my opinion. ~~~ Anyways its pretty good. =D
no, i just kinda wrote it. i was listening to music and decided i wanted to write a poem... i don't really think it was the music though
no worrys kevz, the people in a 10 mild radius that i know of... i either hate or are just friends *stands on roof and looks around thinking* nope no one 'sept you
thanks :D yea it just popped into my head and i wrote it down...weird it turned out as well as it did
YAY!!!!!! Other people who like poetry!!!! ANd like to write it and post it! YAY!!! It was good, but i couldnt really feel all of it... Like the emotion wasnt really there...
This is beautifull Kikame...beautifull *cries* No really...It kinda reminds me of things I made in the past...and my missed friends from who I'll never hear again...so far from me...*cries* Anyways...this is great Kikame...good job...I have no tips since I totally suck at writting poetry...:)
