So i found this on my computer and decided to post it and see if i get any feedback... This was originally for my high school newspaper, and the style kinda looks like Calvin and Hobbes... but hope you get the punchline and get a good laugh. (or at least a happy smirk...) Any comments, and/or critiques would be greatly appreciated! BTW this is about a year old... i really need to make more modern stuff... Spoiler
The lead in was a tad abrupt and possibly awkward, like many if not most three panel comics I've dealt with, but the punchline was clever and amusing enough to do the job. Your art is also nice and gave that Sunday funnies feel, it beats the fucking daylights out of the comics in the daily paper my school puts out.
Thanks! Yeah, i actually did this all on computer, but i used a bamboo pad and pen, so it's kinda like on paper... Punchlines are hard to come up with, and i felt that this would amuse people who actually enjoy such things. when i submitted it to the paper, i was afraid that all the skaters and gangster kinds of people would've talked badly about it, but i never heard anything. (sorry if you are either one of those, a lot of those groups people don't care too much about art.) But thanks again! I liked making a fun short "sunday comic." different from the usual graphic novels i do...
Nice one, although, to be honest, i think you could have done a bit better with the delivery. For a first attempt at the style though, its quite awesome. I'm very interested in seeing your more recent work. Plus, you do graphic novels?
