Larxene's Life ( a story of her being friends with 12 boys)

~Chapter 1~


Larxene wakes up out of a pleasant dream. She walks down stairs to the castle breakfast room with a smirk on her face. " Good morning!!" said demyx skipping down past her.She thought amazingly how is he so happy all the time?
She stopped xigbar was standing against the wall with his hands crossed. "Xig-"
She began to say but stopped he looked angry.She walked down and down the stairs seeming to carry her feet, this spiral would never end like it has done for
Demyx who she could see eating a muffin happily beside a laughing Luxord. When Xigbar was out of sight and the table was near she grabbed an apple and sat down." Larxene are you on a diet??" said Luxord laughing. " I see you are having a good day.. "she pointed out. " Yup." He replied. " Well you wont be if you ask me that again!""Yes sir !" He giggled " Thats it!!"Larxene hollared.
" Stop it you two..." A few heads turned.It was Xemnas walking down the spiral staircase." I have to hear this every morning Larxene?" He sighed."Well Luxord asked me if-" She was cut off." I dont care just stop it!" He said putting he fist on the table.Demyx's muffin went up and landed on Axel's head.The muffin soon became ashes and Axel brushed them all off and onto the table,then onto the floor.Demyx jumped." My muffin!"He picked up all the ashes and ran to the garbage can. Zexion looked up from his book.He sighed."what are we going to do with him?"He said at last after Demyx was far away with his muffin ashes.
"Nothing..." said Xaldin "We cannot destroy him just because he is useless...."
" Darn.." said Marluxia rolling back up his blueprints." Marly can you pass the butter?"said Larxene changing the subject." Sure.."He answered. She had taken a piece of toast while they where talking about Demyx.She spread the butter all over the bread.- Silence-.She crunched down hard to make notice.But it was Demyx who turned heads as he skipped screaming with yet another blueberry muffin. Axel rolled his eyes.demyx sat and put the muffin on the side where Xaldin was away from Axel." Oh please"said Axel eating his bagel."Hmm needs toasting.."He skimmed the top of the bagel with his hand." Now,thats good stuff"
" Demyx stop it!!"said Larxene he put the muffin between his legs and was petting it.Xaldin blew the muffin away."Oh no!!"Demyx ran after it." Muffin I will save you!"he yelled."Where'd you blow it to?" asked Xigbar who finally cheered up and sat down." Hall of empty melodies." he replied." Oh thanks I hang in there."said Xigbar with a grumpy face." Welcome happy to help you sir." Said Xaldin.Zexion looked up from his book." Stop."Lexeaus came running down the stairs making everything shake. " Hey guys."he said out of breath." come look Roxas is still snoozing so i took the liberty of pranking him for ya Xigbar."His deep voice returned to normal breathing.They all piled up the stairs execpt for Vexen( who was still sleeping),Xemnas(who was dead against this kind of thing),Zexion ( who was way to into his book to notice they all had left.)and Demyx(who was still chasing his muffin.)Roxas was coved in syrup and shaving cream from head to toe.
Xigbar and Axel smiled and together they said " Nice Lex!" " I still have more.." he said holding up syrup and shaving cream bottles " Who's next?"" Larxene!" said Luxord smiling."No!That will ruin my hair!No Stop!"The boys were carring her to the balcony.They poured all the shaving cream and syrup all over her.She ran to Xemnas and yelled out the story to him....


Will Demyx get his muffin,will Larxene kill the boys and will Xemnas get tricked all in the next chapter of...Larxene's Life



I need an idea am i a good telling or is this writing bad please comment and relpy!

 

It's funny x3 But some parts is a little "out of propotions" to put it that way : )
Those places where you just jumped in the story and I did not get it xD
But it's funny I'll read part 2 ; )

 

It was nice, but please don't advertise in my threads... =\

Thank you.

P.S., oh, and your grammar needs a little work. xP

 

Lol!*laughs*Funny!
Sora:hmmm...*grins*
Sora,Are you thinking what I think your thinking?
Sora:*innocently*no.

 

sorry for that advertise i wont sorry!

 

nice but..hmm not the best

 

To me you are jumping to much every where. You got a good idea going. You just need to make it flow a little better.

 

It's ok. It could use a little work, but I like it.