Traditional Art L stands for lack of originality. T'is without reference.

Yeah, cnc, comments, crits, whatevs.

(Again, this was taken with a horrible camera that altered the color of the paper, upped the contrast of the shading, and made his head slightly flatter then it should be. Please disregard this.)

 

The left eye is a bit hard to see but the rest is awesome

 

Cin, what can't you do? Seriously, you pwn at everything. I wish I knew how to shade ;_;
BTW, I want your handwriting D:

 

Ubberly sexy, cin.

I just adore your detail in shading in such. His eyes are kinda funked up and almost offcenter, though.

 

I can't sing worth ****, if that makes you feel any better.

 

That makes me the better person. ;D

 

My eyes!
Dx

Dude just, awesome job,there's nothing wrong with this artwork . . .
*lubs*

Total sexyness!

 

Ohhh, that's hot.

Well I have a few things to point out though:

-His toes! it's like where are they D:. You should really define them a bit more, I know some of it may be caused by the camera, but you should mark them out a tad more.

-The bottom thing on the chair with the wheels, IMO it's a tad to small and should really be drawn bigger to fit the rest of the drawing, though the details on it is really well made.

-To me the arm holding the strawberry seems a little small. It's good proportional wise, but a bit to small to fit the rest of the body.

-I goddamn love the hair, it's damn well made. Aswell as the shadowing (minus the really black part on one of the legs), the proportions are really well and correct, and overal it's a VERT nice, hot, drawing :3.

Btw, may I ask why it's drawed in such a sideways angle ?

And your handwriting reminds me of my own x3.

And now I want to hear you sing!

 

The toes thing was because of the camera. Belive it or not I put a lot of detail into the toes because they always do shots of his toes int eh amine, but I guess allt he detail blended togethor to form a blob due to the shittiness of my camera.

The angle is because he's pushing back on the chair and balancing on the wheel. See it now?

 

Well I just have to believe you then and that it's more detailed irl. :3

Ohhh xD; I get it now, the chair is actually very well done, except for the fact that I think the wheels and the bottom thingy could be bigger.

You have a great eye for details.

 

Augh, do avoid drawing on linepaper. It just ruins the overall impression of your drawing.

Anyway yeah, Kairi made some good points. The hand that is resting on the folded leg is small. Perspective of the...bottom part of the chair is also kinda wrong; instead of a straight frontal, just slightly incline downwards. I would also adjust the perspective of the arm set in the same way but make it less exagerated than the bottom part.

Decent work though.

 

wow that is really good! i love the shading and of the fact that it is L. the only thing i have a slight problem with is the face, it is a little off but it still looks really good! ^^. i love it!